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Yea, just got my fix. Look forward every monday for this. Thanks. Sorry to hear that your not feeling well.

UGH~~~!!!
So much want!
I have such unhelpful reviews, I know, but I'm SO CURIOUS and EXCITED about every new chapter of this fic.
And now I don't have any way to distract myself from new chapters because my only other Monday entertainment just got cut off.
ME

Yeahhh, another great chapter.

You would think that after all the stunts you've pulled, I would've seen this coming a good mile away. Its a fantastic chapter and yes it was wrong of us to assume that when you said "They're here" that you meant the autobots. Now are you using some of the TF:A characters (also note that I'm not keen on my G1 since I was too young at the time to remember any of the episodes)? This is just for clarification, so I don't end up confusing myself lol; people have made fics where they go from movieverse to an animated series then back, it can get confusing someitmes. Your still meeting my standards fic-wise and your also doing a good job at making us think what you want us to. You'd make a great interrogator lol. 'll be looking forward to next week and truthfully for the first time you've left me at a standstill for what I think you may reveal in your next chapter. I hate the feeling, but I know it takes a skilled author to do that so congratulations. If you were to make a new version of this story (replacing these characters with your own original equivalents) and sell it publically I would buy it in a heartbeat. Fantastic work, you rock. ~NetherOnyx

P.S. If you are actually an author in real life please tell me cause I want to learn more about how your fabulous brain works and how you develop characters and how you see the literature world.

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FUCK.
Oh well, it's not like I'm *not going to read* it or something.
Besides, what will 'Cade do when he figures out what's happening, right?
Still things to love, right?
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FUCK.
ME

Holy crap it took two days off nonstop reading when getting home from work to finish this. AWESOME! :3 Its monday and I'm waiting for the next chapter.

GUHH!!!!
*WANT WANT WANT*
I adore this story so much! I kept waiting for the whole scene where Prowl finds out about Jazz, and now I know I don't have to wait much longer for it! Two weeks, tops! *happy Happy HAPPY!*
ME

Yeahhhh, the transmitter works . . . but for how long:). Keep up the great work, this story always keeps me on the edge of my seat.

YOU are such a mean tease!!!! I thought for sure Ratchet and Wheeljack were gonna kiss. I was cheeering at the though of it because you set it up perfectly. He pulled him in close, hugged him, looked him straight in the eye...er optics and then..."Thanks" I've been faithful since chapter 19 DON'T TOY WITH MY EMOTIONS :P. Ok now that I'm done being a dramaking lets move on to what I have to think of this chapter. Up to a point I could live with Barricade's personality, but now he's just so out of character. Could you please put a little more decepticon back in him so it doesn't feel so awkward. It's like he's not even a 'Con anymore. 10/10 overall I loved this chapter a lot...even though you became a tease lol.

Ch. 28. (Clapping) Really liked this chapter an the explination, it helps explain their need to start making their own energon. Now we need to find out what's going on between the twins. As always looking forward to Ch 29.