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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ughh, I think today you're like the umpteenth person to have burst my bubble today Queenie. I was hoping for at least a kiss in this chapter, but whatever it was an awesome chapter, so that made up for it. Yes that fuel thing did help a lot. I was wondering why 4 giant robots couldn't make a transmitter without blowing up. I just thought it was for comedy, I didn't actually think there was a reason behind it. Oh and thanks for bringing back some more sunny and side's drama, I think that's the best part I like about your story; two incestous brothers fighting constantly lol. Fantastic story 9.5/10 overall so far and 11/10 on development. Can't wait for next week, NetherOnyx out.
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm~...Upon reflection I'm not so sure that Miles would be as scared of 'Cade as everyone else, because like Sam's mom he'd never met him before his needing their help. Which means that Miles is obviously more of a scardy cat than Judy, but then, Judy's awesome.
Also, *can* Miles' dad get 'Cade's hood open? It would be hysterical of all they needed was to pull it, but they were too scared of breaking something on the off-chance that they never did.
ME
Also, *can* Miles' dad get 'Cade's hood open? It would be hysterical of all they needed was to pull it, but they were too scared of breaking something on the off-chance that they never did.
ME
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 27. I've tried to keep Barricade at a distance, but after this chapter, I can't help it, I like him. I'm just wondering what the police is up to, is it another decepticon? and if it is, why didn't Barricade pick him up? I feel a cliff hanger with that part. Really liked meeting Mile's parents. Can't wait for more.
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter *pats you on shoulder*. When I read your story, I feel like I'm waiting for a new episode of my favorite tv show to come out next week. And if your wondering how it makes me feel, I love the feeling bring it on I can't wait for the next installment. Oh, and thankyou for tieing up the sunny and sides drama for me. It was the first thing that popped back into my head when I started reading chapter 27. Oh and this is just a guess for chapter 28: Chemistry and Reassureances, but could this finally be our first look into... O.K. I'll come out bluntly and say it AUTOBOT SEX!!!!! :P
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kya!!!
Oh man, so the Autobots are 'going native' and their newer companions are freaked out by it, Sam is starting to like 'Cade more and Miles is developing a fear of 'Cade from stories despite the fact that Sam is comfortable(ish) with him.
SWEET.
ME
Oh man, so the Autobots are 'going native' and their newer companions are freaked out by it, Sam is starting to like 'Cade more and Miles is developing a fear of 'Cade from stories despite the fact that Sam is comfortable(ish) with him.
SWEET.
ME
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is what I look forward to every week. I love the interaction between Sam, Barricade and Bee, The feeling I'm getting from Barricade is he seems like he's taking on the role of a brother with Sam. Loved the last part. Poor Autobots thinking they have gremlins. LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.K. WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN SUNNY AND SIDES???? First they had a big fight and now they're talking to each other. Im so confused. Can you please tell me if I missed something in your story? Anyways your story is still excellent, can't wait for next week.
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.K. I just finished reading all 25 chapters and I gotta say BRAVO!!!! Your story is amazing. I can't wait for the new chapters to come. Although i got to admit I was kinda disappointed that you didn't follow up on the Sunny and Sides drama I was looking forward to seeing what happened between them and why he said "Everyone's against me". If I were to rate this so far, I would say it's anywhere between 4.5 and 5 stars. Keep up the great work and I'll keep up the positive reviews :D
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, the ending got me laughing, they still believe that there's a gremlin running around. Just when things start to settle down again, this is gonna get them all worked up again.LOL. So, now Miles is going to be part of the team, huh? Wonder what or if he'll get an Autobot? LOL. I gotta agree with BumbleBee, Barracide is pure evil for getting Trent's truck covered in tickets again. LOL. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAHHH!!! WOMAN!!
Stop with the insistant cliff-hangers! THEY MAKE ME HATE (love) YOU SO MUCH!!!
ME
Stop with the insistant cliff-hangers! THEY MAKE ME HATE (love) YOU SO MUCH!!!
ME