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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Evil? Yeah, you better believe it:) Can't wait for chapter 15.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, I am enjoying reading it alot. Keep the chapters coming.
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. Barricade brought up a very interesting point, I am wondering what the others reaction will be to the loss of the Allspark. Can't wait for chapter 14.
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An interesting fic, to say the least. *grins* Hope you keep writing.
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAS!!! -dies- I mean who wouldn't laugh at that? It's as bad as the movie Cars. -snickers- And then Ironhide getting wacked several times by flying wrenches and other items. Who knew Prime had it in him... -chuckles- And then Group Hug... you crack me up -dances- Yeah Wheeljack is on his way. Sweet now we'll have the mad scientist that goes BOOM and the crackpot chief of security to liven our days =] Along with our usual words of wisdom from Hide that no one pays any attention to. -snort- -claps- Another great chappie dear. -sits out plate of brownies- To try and get you through the week. -goes back to read again- gas... -snickers-
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, I loved this chapter LOL!!!!, poor Optimus(grin). I can't wait to see the next chapter. Great job.
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, this is interesting and I don't mind the "build up" at all.
I do wonder if I'm the only one hoping for some more Lennox and Ironhide interaction?! (That ship is actually growing on me a lot since reading this story).
More please! :-D
~KaraQ
I do wonder if I'm the only one hoping for some more Lennox and Ironhide interaction?! (That ship is actually growing on me a lot since reading this story).
More please! :-D
~KaraQ
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Queen you crack me up -dies laughing- This story is really well thought out. And I love how you go back and forth... Save us from Red Alert -snickers- Oh God the twins.... I really like how your portraying 'Cade. And Judy is a trip just like in the movie. I think he likes Judy and Mikeala just a lil bit -snort- Poor Bee... Well I'm waiting for next week... bouncing in my seat for the next chapter
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch.11. Yeah, another chapter!!!!! Great chapter by the way. I'm a little concerned with Sam's mothers reaction? towards Barricade, she's too trusting in what he's telling her as truth. And I've got to side with BumbleBee on his reaction. As always, looking forward to the next chapter.
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, you made my night. Sorry to hear about your finals. Just got home from a rough night at work and was sooooo glad to see another chapter. Gotta say I got a laugh outta Barricade's humor. Gotta say, Sam an BumbleBee are having a pretty good streak of good luck at not getting caught. Can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the great work.