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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope that your muse is just on an extended vacation. There aren't enough HB/John stories out there!
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should write on, it's an intrigueing start! Let me know if you continue.
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohh wheres the rest, more soon pleaseeeeeeee,or if u got more else where tell me please devilburns@yahoo.co.uk
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I've been looking for Hellboy fanfiction everywhere and this is the first story that's drawn me in. I sincerely hope that you decide to continue.
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! *waves madly* are you still alive? please, PLEASE, date up!! this is WAY too good to be left unfinished!!
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My, you are quite the cunning linguist.
Your skill with the English language outranks that of the rest of this web site to a great degree - the best i have yet to read. I am by no means "well versed" in smut, though i thoroughly enjoy it, but you are of a different caliber. My suggestion is to, if you have not already, seek out more education in writing and try some freelance work on the side.
You have a flair, work on it because it is a most excellent style.
Your skill with the English language outranks that of the rest of this web site to a great degree - the best i have yet to read. I am by no means "well versed" in smut, though i thoroughly enjoy it, but you are of a different caliber. My suggestion is to, if you have not already, seek out more education in writing and try some freelance work on the side.
You have a flair, work on it because it is a most excellent style.
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update Hell's boy
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start i hope to see more.
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is the start of a great story. i can tell.please update soon.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot, can I see more? A bit twisted that Myers is leaving because he's jealous of Liz. I wonder if and how Hellboy and John will get together nowé