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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I waited so long for this and you didn't disappoint.The entire chapter was fabulous!I liked your version of Jack's past as well as the explanation of his bizarre behavior from the earlier chapter :-)
Keep writing!!1
Keep writing!!1
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You made me smile(a lot)...
Keep going, a realy love it-especialy the way you describe Jack and Lizzie, you have a lot of fresh ideas and in the same time you keep to Jacks (fanfic-readers-know)past. Great!
Keep going, a realy love it-especialy the way you describe Jack and Lizzie, you have a lot of fresh ideas and in the same time you keep to Jacks (fanfic-readers-know)past. Great!
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KEEP GOING! I can't wait for the next chapter! ;)
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please please PLEASE update this story soon...I LOVE it!! I'm just dying to know what happens next!
JackSparrowsWench
JackSparrowsWench
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey dumpling! I finally got a chance to read this chapter and I loved it! Jack really is an ass but I guess all will be well in the next chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Fantastic job! Alice did a fantastic job on Will's part!
Fantastic job! Alice did a fantastic job on Will's part!
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job on this one and I can't wait for the reason to be revealed.What could possibly be his excuse?Dunno...Simple answer?It cracks my head!
Does your sister publish here or elswhere?I'd love to read more of her stuff!She's damn good!
Does your sister publish here or elswhere?I'd love to read more of her stuff!She's damn good!
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A funny one. Jack and Lizzie are fully in character. Bravo! And the description of 'swiming Jack'-very impressive! And I liked the hint about 'the innocent Lizzie' being in ol'Jack's company;).
I like your writing and the tension you create between those two. And I realy love your nickname.
Keep going-great work!
PS: I "discovered" a song-I don't know if it's your taste, but for me the text is Killing:Kelly Clarkson - Addicted :)
I like your writing and the tension you create between those two. And I realy love your nickname.
Keep going-great work!
PS: I "discovered" a song-I don't know if it's your taste, but for me the text is Killing:Kelly Clarkson - Addicted :)
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm... captian jack sparrow.. all alone in the warm blue water.. and he's by himsel because? *looks over at lizzie* there something wrong wit this picuture.. lol :P as usall another great chapter.. write more soon.. :)
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How typically Jack! I loved it...can't wait for the next chapter!
JackSparrowsWench
JackSparrowsWench
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is very addicting.. i hope you know that.. :) anyway.. yay for new chapter! very good.. write more soon!