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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If I smoked, I'd need a cig after that!!! You are awesome!
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Captain Jack Sparrow would never do anything deliberate to hurt his dear Lizzie. While Jack was fuming at Lizzie on deck with the crew watching, that was only a show to protect his reputation, Aye?
Anyways, I love it so far! WRITE S'MORE!
Anyways, I love it so far! WRITE S'MORE!
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey sugar pie! I had to read this again! Very, very hot! The phrase Ready for you sounds better than Yearning for you. When I sent you the chapter back, I thought about that! But anyway, excellent as usual. Thanks again for letting me help you! Take Care! Update soon!
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that's a great story, I love how Jack so desperately awaits the apology and how Elizabeth covers her -shall I call it - lust for him behind pugnacity; a seamless transition from POTC1 and 2. Well done. IMHO much more plausible then POTC3, I missed exactly that controversy in it (safe for the hints of bedding and Jack's hand below her shirt,of course, for it still is/was a Disney Movie....:-)
Please update soon, can't wait to read the continuation!
Please update soon, can't wait to read the continuation!
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read something good in a looong time, and this one is forming to be one... No it already is! Great job. You describe all details and averything is going soo smooth. I realy liked the idea of the revisit "their" island and the debt(fancy for it:])... I'm sure with all that passion Lizzie kissed him there's no way she doesn't WANT HIM!... But stick to the praise and the plea-so please updete soon I'm going crazy... From the first two chsppies i thought it's gonna be one hell of a fanfic and so far I'm right! I'm curious what's gonna hapen in the next chappie. O.K. so keep the good work!
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!Please update soon!I love it!
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Incredible story. I love the way you are resolving the shackling-at-the-mast issue (which AWE so disappointedly did NOT address). This is such
a promising story, please continue - please update soon!
Megan
a promising story, please continue - please update soon!
Megan
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it, cant wait for the next chapter :) xx
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am on the absolute EDGE of my seat with this one!
Brilliant!
And I'm waiting for more---just like Lizzie!!
Brilliant!
And I'm waiting for more---just like Lizzie!!
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enojoying this story so far! I love Jack and Elizabeth together! Hope that Elizabeth gets past trying to be all proper and act like she doesn't want Jack to take her, and soon ;) Can't wait for the next chapter!
JackSparrowsWench
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