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If I smoked, I'd need a cig after that!!! You are awesome!

Captain Jack Sparrow would never do anything deliberate to hurt his dear Lizzie. While Jack was fuming at Lizzie on deck with the crew watching, that was only a show to protect his reputation, Aye?
Anyways, I love it so far! WRITE S'MORE!

Hey sugar pie! I had to read this again! Very, very hot! The phrase Ready for you sounds better than Yearning for you. When I sent you the chapter back, I thought about that! But anyway, excellent as usual. Thanks again for letting me help you! Take Care! Update soon!

that's a great story, I love how Jack so desperately awaits the apology and how Elizabeth covers her -shall I call it - lust for him behind pugnacity; a seamless transition from POTC1 and 2. Well done. IMHO much more plausible then POTC3, I missed exactly that controversy in it (safe for the hints of bedding and Jack's hand below her shirt,of course, for it still is/was a Disney Movie....:-)
Please update soon, can't wait to read the continuation!

I haven't read something good in a looong time, and this one is forming to be one... No it already is! Great job. You describe all details and averything is going soo smooth. I realy liked the idea of the revisit "their" island and the debt(fancy for it:])... I'm sure with all that passion Lizzie kissed him there's no way she doesn't WANT HIM!... But stick to the praise and the plea-so please updete soon I'm going crazy... From the first two chsppies i thought it's gonna be one hell of a fanfic and so far I'm right! I'm curious what's gonna hapen in the next chappie. O.K. so keep the good work!

Great story!!!Please update soon!I love it!

Incredible story. I love the way you are resolving the shackling-at-the-mast issue (which AWE so disappointedly did NOT address). This is such
a promising story, please continue - please update soon!

Megan

i love it, cant wait for the next chapter :) xx

I am on the absolute EDGE of my seat with this one!
Brilliant!

And I'm waiting for more---just like Lizzie!!

I am really enojoying this story so far! I love Jack and Elizabeth together! Hope that Elizabeth gets past trying to be all proper and act like she doesn't want Jack to take her, and soon ;) Can't wait for the next chapter!

JackSparrowsWench