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person Sassy Sparrow
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! You'Re writing a wonderful story, very promising!
I'd love to know what'll happen on that island, now that they're there again ;o)
Please update soon, I'm totally curious now.
Thanks for sharing the story with us.
Take care,
~Sassy~
person Will-Hater
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You updated!Great chapter,you really impressed me!
I hate the idea of Willabeth,so I was delighted to see the whelp thrown into the brig, and Jack following Lizzie to the island!
person LizzieSwan
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!!! Great!You've done amazing job! I LIKE it verrrry much! Please keep going, I can't wait to read what's gonna happen next!....
person vicky
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god i love it, you are so very talented, i hope jack isnt going to harm her....they love each other and should do something about it....being on that island is the perfect opportunity!! xx
person pirate lady
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!I really loved what you did to Lizzy-that was what she deserved a long time ago!This should happen yet in AWE.I also enjoyed the way Jack treated our little whelpy eunuch.Finally Jack had it out with them!Honestly,I had a great time reading your story.Lol it's so sensational!Keep writing and do it fast :) I'm waiting!
person Caitlin
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg...omg... you're so mean!
I never did anything to you and you're just going to leave it there?
SOOO glad there are still amazing writers on here. I've been jonesing for a good juicy story.
Update soon!
-Cat
person Ala
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is awesome! I really love Jack,but both Jack and Elizabeth are just perfect.By the way,she deserved it 100%!!!Off the plank!
I'm waiting for another chapter!!!
person lizzieSwan
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Amazing. So far sooo good!
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely beginning, and I wouldn't even have guessed English isn't your first language. :-) I eagerly await a second chapter.
person rosaseravo
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Your English is very good! Just one more comment. Hurry up and update it! I want to see what happens next! :)