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for The Akeh

by Keen

person Steve
schedule January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well written but OC is really, really Mary Sue. You claim it's not but if it wasn't you would have made her attractive and no one would want to sleep with her, but be forced to. But you didn't. So, Mary Sue.
person GellyBelly
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I have been waiting for Liz and Doctor Knight to ... wow. HOT!
person pinkhare
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome ,wonderful,sweet ,sexy sad story . I love it . You are one amazing writer !
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! I can't believe she's dead even though I had a feeling that would happen. It made me so sad! Poor abe! I love this story and I always review what I read just cuz I know authors like to know their work is appreciated(sp?). Hopefully their be another chapter or 10 (lol) to wrap everything up
person Anon
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I like how you have an actual story instead of pure smut, but the smut is good too. Lol. As someone who reads a LOT of fanfics, I seriously think yours is in my top 5. I want this story to end well but I don't want it to end yet! Good job
person pinkhare
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woohhooo ! I'm still keeping my fingers crossed for a happy ending . Really i just want to see Abe happy the poor guy never seems to get any in the comic or movies .
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I went on vacation with some friends, and was very upset when internet was not accessible to me. Imagine my happiness when I came back and found two glorious new chapters! Whoo hoo! Keep up the good work, I eagerly await updates!
person gemberling
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i usually hate abe/ofc, but this is very well written and really hot. :D and this is coming from a lesbian :D i need you to finish this please don't leave us hanging like other writers do!!
person pinkhare
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please please have a happy sex filled ending !
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Again, I must say: Awesome. Characterization is spot on, and I love your takes on History and such. You have got to be one of my favorite people here, haha. You know, I read the Hellboy comics, and didn't really enjoy them, I saw the movies, and didn't really enjoy them. But I must say, your fic has opened a new admiration for me and this fandom! Bravo, another great installment!