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Another awesome chapter. This story is much better the second time around. It makes more sense and its better written. I like how you go deeper into their charactors and desribe the scenes with great imaginery. Im glad you pretty much kept the dialouge and situations the same but put in a few extra things to make it funnier, sexier, and more vivid. I think my favorite thing in this chapter is when hellboy catchs them and says, "we're close, but not that close." Im sooooo glad u kept it! You even added him turnin his back to him and sayin, "-so ill listen to you like this if u don't mind. " cute brother moment between them.
Hopefully abe and tamara can be together because even though I liked the hellboy movies, I rather have them live happily ever after, along with hellboy and liz. I can't wait for the new chapters and the brand new stuff.
Don't forget about Union of Convenience II now. I check every now and then for that stuff too. I said it before and ill continue to say it, your a great writer and keep up the good work!

Fantastic new chapter! I don't think you need to worry about living up to any expectations, other than your own!:-) You continue to do a masterful job of blending sex into the plot instead of only having it there on the side as a matter of interest. It was very clever of you to have Abe and Tamara begin using the entity's own weapon against it, I liked that a lot! And I like being able to watch the development of two relationships at the same time; Abe and Tamara are quite involved, with a third party in their way that is in the form of an elemental (and WoW, again with the research!) and on the other side we have Liz and HB whose relationship is still in its infancy, but still has a third party in their way, only for them its the usual fear of rejection/being hurt. I love that the whole "possession" thing and the fear of being hurt thing are being juxtaposed, because both of them can cause or stop a lot of things from happening between the characters involved, just for different reasons. I'm eager to see where the relationship between Abe and Tamara ultimately ends up...not sure if you're going to follow the movies or not, but if you are, it's really going to hurt if Abe and Tamara can't get this thing of their worked out!

Great chapter, filled with all the stuff it needed and more! Thanks for sharing, and for the wonderful note at the bottom of the page! I'm glad you appreciate the comments as much as I appreciate your story!:-)

Grace

P.S.
I've got 2 broken fingers taped together, so sorry if my typing is a little off in places and I seem a litte unorganized in my thoughts...I hate "hunt & peck!" Looking forward to more to review, though nonetheless!:-)

It's great to see Abe getting some much needed attention. He's a sexy being and you've settled on a great way to express that without sacrificing who Abe is. Tamara is genuinely likable. Far as the rest- egyptology is a hobby of mine, so a lot of your stuff has made for entertainment beyond just story purposes. Can't wait to see more.

I've been reading your wonderful story over the last few weeks and now that I have caught up, wanted to tell you how magnificent it is and what a talented writer you are! I'd seriously put this storyline on the level of the two Hellboy movies themselves, and in certain instances it even surpasses them! I'm not very familiar with the graphic novel itself, but I love that you've written Red as more like the comic book version that has been placed in the storyline provided by the movies. And in doing that, you've still managed to make him sexy even while describing him as having cloven hooves!:-)

I'm more impressed with your selection and success in focusing on Abe in the way you have! He's never been presented as being very passionate or reckless, and what's so great about him in your story is that you've shown him being just that, but without sacrificing the elegant, aspiring and consciously aware being that he is! It's fantastic to see him getting that kind of attention from a writer and even more fantastic to read!

And your OC's are amazing! The time and thought and detailed research you've obviously done to concoct the character of Tamara makes me giddy when I think about it!:-) I love it when a writer puts themselves out like that, because showing me that you care enough to research the stuff you are writing makes me care so much more about what you are writing! Truly you have done a marvelous job with this story, and I can't wait for more!


Grace Lee

I'm sorry I haven't stayed caught up! My life has been SO busy lately! I finally got a chance to read all the chapters you posted. All I can say is: AWESOME!!! I still can't believe Abe got grounded...but I agree with Professor Broom. Very well written, and I can't wait until the next chapter! I'll try and stay caught up now... hehe

I love this I read it from my new g1 phone I can now have abe stories everywhere I go. I love this and the idea of the story go abe you sex beast can't wait to read more thanks so much your wonderful! Mail me so we can be best friends !bpammy aka sassy p

WOW so I sent a review from my phone that never posted, I got outta bed to typ ethis because the sex was AMAZING WOW the best Ive ever had, I mean I actually cried. Abe was amazing. I cant get over how hard it was for me to breath. Also the boys playing card games talking about the noise that Tamara made, was HILARIOUS I loved it!!!! Please keep more coming. Vday is around the corner thing of us lonely Abe fans.

Also the blood drinking thing, Im only on chapter 8 or 9.... well I didnt see that one coming. The sex thing was just drowning me heheh... your great... you have amazing betas rock on !!!

Sassy P
Pinkmoontribe@gmail.com

So good I can't wait to read more !

I was getting impatient for the update but since you were at the inauguration, its cool. I wish I could've gone. I LOVE OBAMA! Great chapter,can't believe broom is bein such an asshole! Grounding abe and everyone ignoring him. Id love to see him get more assertive and ballsy to people, especially broom. The revised chapters are easier to understand and much better. I had just reviewed a union of convenience II when I saw you updated this too! This 1 dives into nek'kems and the others charactors more. I don't know if you explained it in the story yet but what are they? Demons or spirits? Hopefully well find out soon.
Now the story is gettin better if sekmet wants liz! Nooooo! Pleeeeeeaaase update soon. You'll read the same thing on the review for Union, but you're a great writer.

I finally got around to reading this story. It is very well written and you have my attention completely. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please don't keep up waiting long.

Arianna