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for The Akeh

by Keen

person miyung
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Please update soon....!!!!!!
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this was a wonderful chapter. I'm glad you branched out as to who she jumps, since I doubt the "demon" inside her would be discriminatory in any way. I also look forward to continued exploration of her relationship with Abe, along with all the other minor and major characters in the story, including Manning and Clay... hell, whoever accidentally touches her.

BTW, I laughed for a good minute at the idea of Prof. Broom being sexed up by the Kraken! Funny stuff.
person Anon
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When I first saw u took the story off, I was SO PISSED! I loooove the new story better so I forgive u! Lol. I looove abe stories better than hb stories. Abe is a kind and gentle soul. I love the detail of the characters and the sex scenes.........whooooo! Keep up the good work. Update ASAP!
person Keshley
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just...wow! This is awesome! It doesn't matter that the chapter is so long, just that you updated! I like how you're going with it, so please continue!
person pinkhare
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is just getting more and more beautiful . You've done a great job fleshing out the attraction the two of them have and the problems Tamara is facing . Thank you thank you thank you ! I can't wait to read more . It's kinda sad how often I check to see if there are updates.

Did you remove the original swimming scene ? It was rather sweet.
person GellyBelly
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an intresting story,keep up the good work.
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say that I really really liked this chapter. It really illustrated how she felt towards all contact with every person, regardless of age or gender.
Giving the story more content is definitely a plus. :) As much as I miss being able to read all of the other chapters, this is definitely worth it.
So please! Continue!
person pinkhare
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! this has made the story so much better ,that's saying a lot as I loved the story before . I can't wait to read more .
person Keshley
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This just gets better and better. You WILL continue, right? I want to know what happens! You've done very well so far! I love it, because there are so few Abe stories. Good job!
person LadyScale
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really REALLY hope you bring back the other chapters soon! This has got to be the best Abe fic I have ever read! From Abe's portrayal to the absolutely DELICIOUSLY detailed sex scenes! :D~~ You are one of the very select few people that never forget that Abe is part fish, and incorporate that type of biology into every step of the way throughout the story! The moist skin, the fins, the twitching gills, even the little bristle teeth! I love such sheer attention to detail! :D

Now I only hope that my review would kick you back into writing so I can enjoy the story once again. :)