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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so sad. I love the depth in the chapter. Please please update soon..{le it get a bit happier}
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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH no !! please please please let this end happy and with more smut !
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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Such a terrible cliff-hanger. Please post a new chapter soon, I can't bear the thought of her dying.
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God.
You are the best writer I've found on the web so far.
The way you convey everything... Wow.
Please update! You simply cannot allow this wonderful story to end at the point it is at!
You are the best writer I've found on the web so far.
The way you convey everything... Wow.
Please update! You simply cannot allow this wonderful story to end at the point it is at!
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I like how you have begun to infuse their real emotions into the lust that the entity brings up. Gives me hope that they can continue to have a relationship after everything. Can't wait for more.
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this chapter. Thank you.. I'm glad he knows how she feels. Now I just have to hope for a happy ending .
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I re read chapter four and i guess I missed the whole four months ago part. Opps. I really love this story, there's a subtle sadness to Abe not realizing she actually wants him too so I'm really hoping for a happy smut filled ending ? ! .
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yikes, how did I miss all these updates??
Kudos again, this is very hot stuff and it's nice to see the plot starting to come together. It's nice to see Abe's wild side coming out.
More, please. ;)
Kudos again, this is very hot stuff and it's nice to see the plot starting to come together. It's nice to see Abe's wild side coming out.
More, please. ;)
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Almost forgot about this story and am very glad that I remembered. You are doing a much better job of explaining things, I think I understand why they are trying to release him now. Can't wait for more steaminess!
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful ! I was bit confused when it came to the time line. i think it was the fact that he woke her up and afterward it sounded like it was the second time they had sex.. but the story felt like it was the third.