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Hm, okay, the beginning part confused me a little, but I am sure that all will be clear later. Right?
I hope so. Great update as always.

Nice. The sex scene was amazingly hot. The plot is a little confusing, but I assume that it will straighten out over the next few chapters as the story progresses. Looks like the entity has not very nice plans for our world.

Congradulations - while I have written quite a bit of fanfiction I actually do not read a lot of it and there are few stories that catch my interest immediately enough to make me want to read them... and yours just did ;). I will admit that the lure of Abe smut right from the first chapter is certainly appealing but the story itself has me interested for sure, so good job! I will definitely be returing to read the rest when time allows! Yay for other lovers of Abe Sapien!

Sexy. Can't wait for the next chapter. Very nice job.

What a treat to find this updated! And ooh boy, what a chapter. I might need a few cold showers to get over this one. Excellent work, I can't wait to see how Abe and Tamara are going to react to all this once they have their senses back. I'll be checking daily for the next chapter. :)

Thank you ! I can't wait for more !

I'm dying for more !

Very nice, update soon.

Yay! I'm glad that you decided to update. I can relate to being hesitant about updating, especially when you get so many hits but so few reviews. It can be frustrating, not knowing if people want you to continue with the story. I like the interaction between her and Abe. The long interval between chapters one and two (story time not posting time) was a little frustrating though. I would have like to read about what happened in that year. As long as you slow it down though it should fit enough to still be a great story. Just don't skip another year and make us guess about all of the wonderful scenes there would have been! :) And I hope he gives in soon, although I understand that he doesn't want to 'take advantage of her'. But honestly, those emotions she's feelings are just as real as if they were originally hers, and as long as it's not rape who cares if it was the entity's idea for them to shag rather than hers or his? Can't wait for more,
Lum

I am LOVING this! Usually I can't stand Abe/OFC fics, but you, my dear, are creating something very delicious indeed. Abe deserves some lovin'. I can't wait to read more. :D