rate_review Reviews

I work a night job that can get awfully tedious and boring. That was not the case last night when i brought your story along to read.
It kept me pumped right up till morning and then some (since i have the energy to write this)

I get fed up with a lot of fanfiction because often the author loses sight of the characters. in which case i feel they might as well have written an original.

That was so not the case here. You did a phenomenal job on so very many levels,
Thank you for the amazing night

*sniffles and dabs eyes with tissue*
Great story, I love it! :)

Excellent story. It drew me in.

_C_ may I please ask your advice on a few things. Can you please email me I would appriecate. Hawk_36@hughes.net. I really don't know how to correspond with you on here, but I'd like some advice on a few things. If possible thank you.

Optimus's email in ch.3 was beautiful. Simply beautiful. Thank you for writting it.

*applause* I really... Really enjoyed this story. And ti touched on many subjects ive usually been reasonablyt close to in fiction of this nature (usually cos its not written well enough for me to enjoy it) And this was indeed. Im not sure how you would continue this... would be great of course. But It ends fantasticly (racked my brain for ags in the last part.. i know that song... what.. where is it... lol ) *covers her decepticon pride for a moment* Loved it. Bravo. please write more!

I really love this pairing and I love the story.
It is so very well written.
Thank you for posting it.
I enjoyed reading it very much.

Fantastic, I really enjoyed all three of these chapters, but four was very touching, great job. I hope to see more.