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for Cold

by Ladykohl

person teepirategirl
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. As a matter of fact I loved it so much I decided that I would sign up for an ID just to review this story and was glad to see u accepted anonymous reviews. I don't review much and I thought you would appreciate the fact that your story was THAT GOOD!!! I was in love with your other stories (the one that won the sparrabeth award was AMAZING) and so I thpught I should read this one and ur dialog was breathtaking, heartbreaking and witty and the way you wrote jack's character was so perfect it made me smile. So complex and humorous at the same time, add a dash of wit and a bit of angst and we're all eating out of the palm of ur hand! I'm begging u to continue this and ur other story and to write the sequel to ur first story and i will tell all my friends to read ur stuff. we need more POTC writers like u. BRAVO!! it was great please update
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Please continue it!

JackSparrowsWench
person Arraya
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All three of your fics here are absolutely amazing. What a wonderful way with words you have, and you capture these two perfectly. Write more. Please. What is your name on LJ???
person Sassy_Sparrow
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Please don't stop there - that's far too sad, Jack and Lizzie deserve happiness! You really should continue this, pretty please?
Thanks for sharing it with us readers, you did an amazing job!
Take care,
~Sassy~
person Amanda
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really, really good. And it brought a little tear to my eye. Wonderful job.

I totally think you should continue this, though it is beautiful as a one-shot.
person Ladykohl
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amanda,



Thank you so much for your review! I always appreciate when someone takes the time to do it. I'm glad that it brought a tear to your eye - I haven't lost my touch :-) As for continuing it, I probably will. I just want to get some reactions to this first part... kind of test the waters with it. So, we shall see. Anyway, thanks again for reviewing!



Kohl