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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee hee hee, I love it! This story is just perfect! ^-^
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October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Unbelievably fucking hot and exactly what I wanted =)
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. ^^
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing... not quite as detailed as I was hoping for, but fun to read anyway.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The compounding of the ‘problem’, seemed just a tad bit too fast to be realistic. I realize time was actually passing, but the way it was written, it seemed as if the entire story happened within the span of maybe ten minutes. There were also a few places where words seemed to be missing; not so much a problem with spelling but with grammar.
Other than those little problems, I have to say this is a work to be remembered- it probably even deserves a sequel. ~-^ Very few people are interested in this fetish, but I believe you handled it quite well. Obi Wan’s feelings were entirely within character, I have to say my favorite part of the story was when he realized he was peeing on Qui Gon, but could do absolutely nothing about it.
Other than those little problems, I have to say this is a work to be remembered- it probably even deserves a sequel. ~-^ Very few people are interested in this fetish, but I believe you handled it quite well. Obi Wan’s feelings were entirely within character, I have to say my favorite part of the story was when he realized he was peeing on Qui Gon, but could do absolutely nothing about it.