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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really good
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH ITS OVER OMG
i would have liked it to go on longer only because i like this story alot but it would have goten boring because they are just at home you know im glad it ended so well
your a realy good author keep doing what your doing
i would have liked it to go on longer only because i like this story alot but it would have goten boring because they are just at home you know im glad it ended so well
your a realy good author keep doing what your doing
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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this i sooo good thus far
i couldn't review because normally i use Mozilla instead of explorer and Mozilla broke down until now so here i am
i really love the plot and i really hate everyone getting in jack and Lizzy way epically norringtion he really pisses me off
this is a great story i cant wait to finish it and see how it ends
i couldn't review because normally i use Mozilla instead of explorer and Mozilla broke down until now so here i am
i really love the plot and i really hate everyone getting in jack and Lizzy way epically norringtion he really pisses me off
this is a great story i cant wait to finish it and see how it ends
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOAH WOAH WOAH
what an amazing start and 50 chapters! you have to be KIDDING ME im sooo happy to read it
what an amazing start and 50 chapters! you have to be KIDDING ME im sooo happy to read it
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bravo, darlin'! Good job. I really enjoyed this story, but I think you chose to end it at the right time.
Now I'm off to catch up on the other things you've written!
~Princess of the Pearl
Now I'm off to catch up on the other things you've written!
~Princess of the Pearl
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your best work yet, just enough story to support the sex, which was well done. !
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's your story, so do with it what you please, but I do think that royalpinkdogs had a good idea.
Anyways, great chapter, as always!
Anyways, great chapter, as always!
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This might be a good place to let it end. Have the aunt and uncle be old and ill, and prevail upon Jack to stsy, take over the house and estate and become the Lord of the Manor. Of course, he'd still own the Pearl and they could travel, but it would give them stability and a place to be safe from all the threats that have plagued them!
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, as always!
And your welcome for the reviews ;)
And your welcome for the reviews ;)
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, as always! Keep up the good work!