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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! I think it's good that you allowed some time to pass before jumping into new things for the Sparrows. I hope Jack will learn to be a little more patient with his son, though!
Good job. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Good job. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet! In a really smutty, sweaty kind of way...
Good job, keep it going!
Good job, keep it going!
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! No! Don't stop there!
Good chapter nonetheless, though. Nice to see Jack'n'Lizzie getting on better!
Good chapter nonetheless, though. Nice to see Jack'n'Lizzie getting on better!
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how sad! Maybe Governor Swann will call off this ridiculous pursuit of Jack now that Elizabeth has been hurt... *hint-hint, nudge-nudge* And poor Jack! Hopefully Lizzie was just speaking out of anger and doesn't really blame him. And maybe she didn't lose the baby after all! It is possible to spot during pregnancy... happened to my mum when she was pregnant with me and here I am. Hmm. Interesting. (Okay, I'll shut up now.)
Good job! Keep it up, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter! Go Sparrabeth!
Good job! Keep it up, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter! Go Sparrabeth!
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good work, keep it up!
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's it. I'm jumping into your story and beating Governor Swann with his wig.
Please don't kill Jack! Pretty please? Pretty pretty please?
Please don't kill Jack! Pretty please? Pretty pretty please?
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Governor Swann better not lay a hand on Jack (or have someone do it for him)! If he does, I'm going to jump in your story and steal his wig and then beat him with it! Argh!
Now that I've gotten that out of my system, great chapter! Do update soon!
Now that I've gotten that out of my system, great chapter! Do update soon!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok. I like the story. But I think there are some things you really need to work on. First off it appears that everyone is wearing Taffeta. Though that may have been true for the dresses, I don't think everyone wore it. Especially not as night clothes. The timeline is also a bit wishy washy. Perhaps you got confused as to what you were writing? And also, I honestly don't think that Elizabeth would have been on her feet that soon after her pregnancy. And especially not having sex. I still like it. Just needs a bit of a fix.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I couldn't review, but I couldn't read also, because I was province-sorry!
Well you're going great! I realy like to where this fic is going to. I like that Lizzie is pregnant Again, and that her father gave full pardon to Jack(I'm still not very certain about he truth in it)! Keep writing pleace! Nice job!
Well you're going great! I realy like to where this fic is going to. I like that Lizzie is pregnant Again, and that her father gave full pardon to Jack(I'm still not very certain about he truth in it)! Keep writing pleace! Nice job!
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I really like how the story is progressing so far. Can't wait for another little Sparrabeth baby to be born! Keep up the good work!