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for If it had missed

by BlueBastard

person Melwyn
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this story is awesome. Ive never read a Star Wars story that wasn't 'canon' fanfiction (the books) and that was pre-New Wars. This though... I cannot wait to read more.
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, please write more soon.
person yuurimaoh
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how happy I was to see that you've updated! I laughed so much when Obi-wan called Maul a sex fiend, but it's driving me about as crazy as Maul that Obi-wan keeps holding himself back and refuses to cooperate! For crying out loud, he'd get there faster if he just let Maul have his way with him!! Thanks so much for updating! My birthday's in a week, so this is the best birthday present ever! I'd take an update of If it Had Missed over cake and ice cream ANY time.
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
woooooooof!!! I just stumbled across this story (not my usual fandom) and wow. This is HOT. I am in love. Lust. Something. Please keep this going!? (Serious: I'm begging you!)
person Syn
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully. The plot is running very well and smooth and I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story it is so good and I am wondering how connected they really are and I can't wait for you to explore that. Thank you for a great story.
person M
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey... um so this is new for me. Don't really leave much feedback let alone on a slash story. Call me a closet slasher I guess. Anyway this is one hell of a HOT story! Out of all the pairings out there Maul/Obi is one of my all time favorites. Nice amount of frustration and an actual story. Is there any more to this or has this story been abandoned? Could you let me know if you continue or just never posted the rest? Please say there's more!
person Darth Spazzcake
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You just invented my OTP for Star Wars.
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah I said before you introduced me to my OTP. and you need to update.
person SheriLyn
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
best star wars pairing...love the story cant wait for update. :)