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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh.... that was so awesome. Definately worth waiting for, that scene. I am SO glad you're still writing this... that was a ridiculously hot scene. One of the best I've ever read. I adore the tension you get when a Sith is so determined to break down a Jedi in the best possible way.
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is AMAZING!
You're not finished it yet are you?? I want moooore!! XD
The feelings of the two, combined with how they react to the subtly described settings, and eachother.. it's just GAH!
I love this pairing too much for words... Or maybe it's just Maul that I love... Whatever.. But you make it so perfect...
The plot diffrences, like how Maul's not dead.. RAD! Thanks for that!! >_< but I mean it, really, having Qui-Gon barely alive is cool, and how you made Maul the Sith Lord, by killing Palpatine (though I'd like to see that scene... O_o) as opposed to the more submissive 'Apprentice' is fantastic. It makes it easier for him to dominate Obi-Wan.
Speaking of... I LOVE how you describe his mental fights against the Sith... it's adorable, and endearing, and as much as I'm cheering for the Dark SIde, and Maul's intentions etc etc, I'm happy he's still struggling. ^_^
Anyway... you own for writing this, it's HOT!, and amazing, and it sucks that you haven't updated since forever ago.. I hope you're still alive, so you can finish it..
Best wishes!
You're not finished it yet are you?? I want moooore!! XD
The feelings of the two, combined with how they react to the subtly described settings, and eachother.. it's just GAH!
I love this pairing too much for words... Or maybe it's just Maul that I love... Whatever.. But you make it so perfect...
The plot diffrences, like how Maul's not dead.. RAD! Thanks for that!! >_< but I mean it, really, having Qui-Gon barely alive is cool, and how you made Maul the Sith Lord, by killing Palpatine (though I'd like to see that scene... O_o) as opposed to the more submissive 'Apprentice' is fantastic. It makes it easier for him to dominate Obi-Wan.
Speaking of... I LOVE how you describe his mental fights against the Sith... it's adorable, and endearing, and as much as I'm cheering for the Dark SIde, and Maul's intentions etc etc, I'm happy he's still struggling. ^_^
Anyway... you own for writing this, it's HOT!, and amazing, and it sucks that you haven't updated since forever ago.. I hope you're still alive, so you can finish it..
Best wishes!
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I finished reading this last night and I just noticed it hasn't been updated since July! Sad! I suppose this is my own writing karma for not finishing my own fic's even though i get reveiws asking for more.
I do hope this fic is continued! I like the dynamics in this pairing A LOT! Plus Darth Maul is HOT anyway!
I do hope this fic is continued! I like the dynamics in this pairing A LOT! Plus Darth Maul is HOT anyway!
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must commend this story so far. When I read the blurb, I thought 'na-ah', but after reading the first chapter, it is looking alright. You might want to go through your story and make sure it is grammatically correct, there are a few errors. I will entertain the idea of this story and see if I like where it goes. Will let you know.
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great srory! Keep up the wonderful work.
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn, but this is one of the hottest fics I have EVER read. *fans self* I have always been an Obi-Wan/Anakin fan myself, but this story...jeez, but I can never EVER see The Phantom Menace the same way again. The possessiveness! And the fact that Obi-Wan keeps fighting his reactions so badly...I'll be the first to admit that Darth Maul has completely seduced me to the Dark Side with this story. I mean damn, I'm ALL for him claiming Obi-Wan.
“Now, you are going to tell me exactly WHY you decided to drug what BELONGS to me…” -...I could almost die happy.
I'll be checking almost every day for your next update.
“Now, you are going to tell me exactly WHY you decided to drug what BELONGS to me…” -...I could almost die happy.
I'll be checking almost every day for your next update.
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More please!
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story, you're a great writer! I'm in love with it, please continue. :]
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was SO hot. Absolutely loved it. XD I can't wait to see more! <3
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is the same yaminoyume that commented earlier. I just wanted to let you know that your story inspired some fanart. XD Hope this link works... http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/view/592582/
If you don't have an account on y!gallery, I can upload it onto photobucket too, or e-mail it. :)
Thanks for the wonderful story and inspiration! I hope my interpretation of that scene is close to what you had in mind. XD
If you don't have an account on y!gallery, I can upload it onto photobucket too, or e-mail it. :)
Thanks for the wonderful story and inspiration! I hope my interpretation of that scene is close to what you had in mind. XD