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by BlueBastard

schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg i love this story this pairing is my fav in star wars i hope you continue this pairing is so not writin enough ^ ^
person Confuzzled_Neko
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG,an update!! Thank you so much, and such a new twist. Hopefully either Obi wan comes back or...*grins* Maul kills new nasty jedi & pounces unaware Obi.
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woooo! Teasage! And a nice cliffie too! Im so happy you updated!! Please update again soon!
person Gittajk
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yup, no doubt about it, you MUST continue this!

I love how Obi is struggling with the whole thing and how Darth is like sex personified. The way you write the fic fits him so very well in a hot and evil way!

Keep going!
person Bro
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, nice, really nice, can't wait for an update.
person navajo
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you are so awesome for writing another chapter i cant wait for more
person navajo
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please please continue witting this story this pairing is so hot
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you are completely evil (and I mean that in the most loving way possible) for ending the story where you did. I was all on the edge near the end of the third chapter and when I finished I went to go click on the next chapter link....AND IT WASN'T THERE!!! ;-; It made me really sad.

I hope you'll finish this story, beacuase it's really really good and I love it to death! =D
person navajo
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting can't wait for more
person Vex
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is totally awesome! I love how things are playing out. One way or another Obi will have a lot of internal strugles to work his way through.