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for Apprentice To The Sorcerer

by Savaial

person Anxor
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Any chance of this story having more chapters?
I love it and I'd love to read even more
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've just finished chapter 11 and I just wanted to say what a wonderful story it has been so far. I've really, really enoyed it. I especially liked Elizabeth having to figure out the practical details of having to pas as a man :P Only thing I have'nt liked so far was Elizabeth shaving her legs and armpits. I very much doubt women of that time did that..... Sorry, know it sounds picky, but it's the little details often sets the mood of a story.... :)
person Teresa Thiede
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I appear to be really, really late to this party, but I hope not too late. I don't know if you're still writing or not, but if so I do hope you'll continue this. One of the best POTC fics I've ever read - I love the characterizations of both Jack and Elizabeth; it seems like they're not so much OOC from the movies as showing us what was really going on with those two behind the facades. Add in my longtime love of Captain Peter Blood (both from the Sabatini novel and the Erroll Flynn movie) and some smokin' hot smut....well, you've pretty much hit all my fic kinks with this one.
person Mary
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I found that story and I just can't stop reading it. It's really amazing!!! I love how you present the characters, their thoughts.It's really a wonderful and very unique story!!!I haven't read a story like that.
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome .. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
person 4inukag4
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So it's taken me two days to finish this and I have to say that I love it. I really hope that you will continue it as this is one of the better Sparrabeth stories I have read in some time. Pray continue....

Eagerly anticipating an update.

OokamiMomo: The Wolf Peach
person Laura
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,

I wanted to let you know that even though I'm a Barbossabeth gal, I really have enjoyed your story. Very well written, very true to character...and of course, I've liked the noble way in which dear Hector has been portrayed! :) Truly, though, well done! It is such a pleasure to read adult fanfic that has a well thought out plot, good character development and of course, well written (and nicely led up-to) intimacy!
person Savaial
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kristina Dalton, Princess of the Pearl,tanza and Hettie,
thank you so much for reading and reviewing ATTS. I can't promise anything will be quick with this fic, because I got sucked into the Final Fantasy 7 world and am cavorting around like a sicko. ATTS took months to write because I went ahead and did the old sailing research to make it "believable", or so I hoped. Then, the last movie came out and I got disgusted. Apparently, Elizabeth would rather have her husband once or twice in her lifetime, raise their child without him, and forget all about being the Pirate Queen. Once again, ladies, our love for a man busts us back down to swab. The moral of that movie was certainly nothing I wanted to validate. I doubt I'm alone on that feeling.
So, while I can't promise to be quick, I can promise to not give up on ATTS. Still, it only has a few chapters left in my head anyway. The problem is, I'd have to sit down and read the whole thing over again just to know what I'd left off/intended to do.
And, I'm trying to beta for some people now, as well. Getting behind on that, too. If you follow my history, you'll see I make a habit of getting almost all the way finished with something and then I burn out.
I'm so undisciplined.
Thanks again for your interest in the fic. Feedback is what makes me want to write in the first place.
person Hettie
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are still gonna update this right?
person tanza
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!!! I've found it!!! I've been looking for ths everywhere! It's gonna take me about a week to read but I'll review along the way....oh I'm so excited!