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May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I like it and I like the character. Try not to have her get saved too much, it takes away from the story because when people get needy, Mary sues are born. I like the story a lot and hope you update! By the way, his name is Vaako. Not Vokko. Keep up the good work!
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December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's Vaako. Not Vokko.
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November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Vaako, not Vokko
but, otherwise this is pretty damned awesome!
but, otherwise this is pretty damned awesome!
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August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Alright so just to show how much of a geek I am, I got your referance to The Protector of the Smalls series. XD I want one of those fans. This is wonderful, can't wait for more!
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG KEL!!!!!! I love Tamora Pierce! This is the neatest fic, why didn't you finish it?
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting idea, the Black Widows sound like something the Necros would do and I love the tie in with the little girl from the movie.
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(review of chap 1)Pretty well written. Good characterizations. Remains to be seen how you handle the eros stuff.
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