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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
other than minor spelling problems and usage of so -called "False friends" your story was quite good and very interesting. The problem though was that the timeline was comletely unsure, and then I think you could have written more chapters, for the plot definetly had the potential for this. I am a bit sorry that the story is finished, though a sequel or a few extra chapter would not harm the story. If not, then I`ll look forward seeing your next piece of work