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September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More!
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March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!!!! I came to the last chapter you have uploaded and I'm devastated by there being no more!! Q___Q
Awesome story btw. Poor Nyx..she needs lovin' from both the Yautja males, lol :3
Awesome story btw. Poor Nyx..she needs lovin' from both the Yautja males, lol :3
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December 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hermosa tu historia sigue asi apenas puedas muchos abrazos desde Uruguay
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May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow...This story is amazing.I love all the detail you put into it. I am curious as to what paya is going to do with Nix.
Can't wait for more and great work!!!
From Kyradda.
Can't wait for more and great work!!!
From Kyradda.
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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a marvellous story, and I've enjoyed it very much so far. You've done a great job, I think, making it genuine: things are smelly and messy when they should be, embarrassing and touching when they should be. I LOVE that the main human character is badass but still female: it always disappoints me when characters (or people) conflate badassery with masculinity.
I love, too, that restraint is a problem for the Yautja. Not that it isn't for us, here in real life, but of course the thing that is wonderful about Predators is that they are very powerful; giving them a weakness--a weakness that would be very shameful to a human--makes them gorgeously complex characters. Although Nyx hasn't yet been in a position to fully grasp the situation, Zazin's and Li'ct-ha's lives have kind of exploded in their faces ever since the hunt involving her, and the fact that both Yautja are concerned about this in completely different ways humanizes them. In the literary sense, I mean, not in the taxonomic.
Anyway, I've enjoyed this story enormously, and I think it's very well written in terms of characterization, description, and verisimilitude. I'd love to read more of it, but even if it's not one that you're planning to continue writing, thanks for a great fic all the same.
Yours sincerely,
J.
I love, too, that restraint is a problem for the Yautja. Not that it isn't for us, here in real life, but of course the thing that is wonderful about Predators is that they are very powerful; giving them a weakness--a weakness that would be very shameful to a human--makes them gorgeously complex characters. Although Nyx hasn't yet been in a position to fully grasp the situation, Zazin's and Li'ct-ha's lives have kind of exploded in their faces ever since the hunt involving her, and the fact that both Yautja are concerned about this in completely different ways humanizes them. In the literary sense, I mean, not in the taxonomic.
Anyway, I've enjoyed this story enormously, and I think it's very well written in terms of characterization, description, and verisimilitude. I'd love to read more of it, but even if it's not one that you're planning to continue writing, thanks for a great fic all the same.
Yours sincerely,
J.
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February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY! I really an excited to see a new chapter
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November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. please write more chapters
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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is one of the more beautiful ones I've read. It's not just a story filled with lust but, rather, about love. The interaction between the two yautja and Nix as well as the yautjas' restraint clearly shows how much they value their female companion.
I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. However, in saying that, please do not rush. I'm in the middle of writing my first story and can understand the difficulties in keeping up with posting chapters frequently. Take your time, a good story like yours would be worth the wait.
I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. However, in saying that, please do not rush. I'm in the middle of writing my first story and can understand the difficulties in keeping up with posting chapters frequently. Take your time, a good story like yours would be worth the wait.
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I am just so happy and relieved that you came back to continue this story. I thought for sure that it was not gonna happen, and from what you mentioned about your RL, that would have been quite understandable.
Well, big major kudos to you. I can now once again look forward to more with this wonderful tale!
Even though the chapter was short, I still loved it and enjoyed how you managed to resolve the conflict from the cliffhanger. I was a bit suprised that Blade kept his head on straight as he did, given that I thought he too might have been affected by Nyx. But I guess he was of a far greater consitution than little "Teddy". Poor guy, he can't catch a break now. I wonder if he will be able to control himself in the future?
Once again, so happy to see you back. Will definitely follow this one once again very closely. You rock!
-DGD
Well, big major kudos to you. I can now once again look forward to more with this wonderful tale!
Even though the chapter was short, I still loved it and enjoyed how you managed to resolve the conflict from the cliffhanger. I was a bit suprised that Blade kept his head on straight as he did, given that I thought he too might have been affected by Nyx. But I guess he was of a far greater consitution than little "Teddy". Poor guy, he can't catch a break now. I wonder if he will be able to control himself in the future?
Once again, so happy to see you back. Will definitely follow this one once again very closely. You rock!
-DGD
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September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!! This is seriously a HOT story. I hope you can update soon. I'm surprised Nix hasn't given in to the urges. I mean, Isn't that why "Paya" placed her there and gives her those dreams. Hmmm I truly hope there is more of this!! Have fun!!