rate_review Reviews

twas well worth the wait, at least

pLEASE update this again soon!
this is incredible!

I love this story. You are an excellent writer! Please update soon, I'm dying to know what happens.

Re-read the whole thing over the weekend. I definitely noticed a lot more than when I first read through each chapter. I think it is a different experience reading everything one after the other than one chapter spread out at a time. Again, the level of detail in your descriptions is awesome. Nix is a great character and I am really enjoyed learning about her and seeing how she can/will adapt to each situation.

Oh yeah, this is a mean cliffhanger you're currently leaving us with :P. And so much for Blade just wanting to be more of a "protective" figure for her, as he's clearly fallen head over heels for her as well as Li-ct'ha, though he's better at hiding it.

Again, can't wait for more. Hope you'll continue soon. :)

Yo still waiting. Are you updating? It is a great story so far and believe me people want you to keep going.

Very nice! Short, but yet quite sweet :)

It is indeed very complicated. Who can say for sure how Nix is really feeling. I'd imagine she must be at least somewhat traumatized from what has happened to her lately that she's not thinking too clearly. "Teddy" clearly wants her, but I'm more curious about Blade, does he truly just want to be a sort of "father figure" to her, or something else?

I can't wait to see what you'll do next. Keep it up! :)

I'm back. With more to say than last time. What I like about this story is that your main character is so incredibly colorful. I went colorblind reading about her! Really cool Yautja. That is probably how they would act in these situations. I like Teddy. He's funny. Blade is also a card. She ends up with the former huh? Keep up the good work.

I still looooooooove this story. I wanted nix 2 b w blade. Pleeeeeeeeese update soon. Don't make me beg! (getting down on knees, clasping hands 2gether). Pleeeeeeeeeeeese!

Nice chapter, please update soon.

This is a great story and I really like it. I kind of hope both Teddy and Blade take her. It would only be fair although it would be hard for either of them to share. I doubt though after what they saw they would have been too worried about it.