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This is great. Nix is so cool and I just love Blade.

Very nice!

wow good story hope to see more

I like the plot bunnie for this story - very insightful. Hooked after the first two chapters. Well done. Hope you don't run out of steam as would love to see where this one ends. *Big thumbs up**

HHMMMM...Do I see a pair-up in the future? Very nice action scene. I can't wait to see what comes next. Keep up the great work. And yes, I know, I'm saying the same things over and over again. I'm sorry, but it's late at night and my brain is a puddle of goo. XD

I'm enjoying your story.......will you post often?

Really good so far... I'm glad i found this story... Keep up the good work!!!

I thoroughly enjoyed the beginning of this. The first chapter was just so heart wrenching and did an excellent job of laying down the foundation for Nix as a character. I love how you weave her mourning and pain into the present, be it through the things she wears, how she thinks or the memories that come to her as she meditates. It’s wonderfully subtle. Not so overbearing that the story becomes about a woman and her painful past, but a woman who happens to have a painful past. That totally impressed me. Plus, she’s a strong woman with a ‘kick-ass’ attitude. My personal favourite. Which explains why I was sad to read Alexa got knocked off, I wonder what the back story on that is, if any. In any event, good deal and please keep going!

This looks like a very promising story!! I love your writing style. I hope you won't abandon this story before it's completion like so many other great stories. It's always so disappointing when that happens but understanding as life has a tendency to happen. Sadly this is also the only other than Fanfiction.net that I have found any Predator fanfiction. Well good luck with your story. You're absolutely fabulous!!

Ja ne! ^.~

Yet another addition to what promises to be a fantastic story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!!