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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that was a very well written opening to a story. Very nice!
A great introduction to new characters is always something that I enjoy. I do hope you will continue with this, because I do look forward to future development.
A great introduction to new characters is always something that I enjoy. I do hope you will continue with this, because I do look forward to future development.
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh la la haa haa kidding i like the idea for your story oh please allow me to introduce myself i am Kae'She a writer myself when i started writing these kinda stories i was just like you so if you need help please turn to me by the way my story im still working on now is at fanfiction.net look under aliens/predator the name of my story is called temple warrior but to warn you its a scar/Lex coupling with a twist
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOO!! You have my interest piqued!! Very well written introduction. I am very interested to see more. And to learn more about these characters. I am just hoping that this story line is not done in the usual predictable way. I do love to read new and different things...