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for So This Is Hell

by Jacksfavoritewench

schedule April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love dark Jack!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well done. Pretty intense.
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay I think I did a pretty decent job of capturing the darker side of Jack's feelings for Elizabeth. Let me know what you think! Could just remain a stand alone or I could make a continuation of it.

JackSparrowsWench
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you should DEFINITELY continue this story. Even though it contained dark subject matter, you kept the characters in check and the dialogue suited them perfectly. I hope you do continue on. I'd love to see the development of the aftermath between Jack and Elizabeth.