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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to start with the fact that I really loved this story. I honestly did!
But I find it interesting that you walked out on the latest Hellboy for the characters being out of character. Your characters are equally as outside of the box, to be honest. I realize the fact that you're a fanfic writer and these were the professional producers, I just really find it interesting.
Don't take that the wrong way, though. I loved how you portrayed (misspelled, sorry) all of the characters. The only one that seemed a little off was Manning, who really is a good guy. He yells a lot, but he's not a bad guy, just very stressed out. I guess it just makes me somewhat sad that he got a little torn up for this story.
I'd like to say again that I really did love your fic. The thing I listed odn't take away from the quality, it's just commentary. Either way, I hope to see more from you in the future.
But I find it interesting that you walked out on the latest Hellboy for the characters being out of character. Your characters are equally as outside of the box, to be honest. I realize the fact that you're a fanfic writer and these were the professional producers, I just really find it interesting.
Don't take that the wrong way, though. I loved how you portrayed (misspelled, sorry) all of the characters. The only one that seemed a little off was Manning, who really is a good guy. He yells a lot, but he's not a bad guy, just very stressed out. I guess it just makes me somewhat sad that he got a little torn up for this story.
I'd like to say again that I really did love your fic. The thing I listed odn't take away from the quality, it's just commentary. Either way, I hope to see more from you in the future.
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was freaking beautiful... and the ending tickled me pink. and i dont even like pink XP and while it makes me sad that ur not doing anymore fanfics, the ending 4 the story has me to happy to b mad at u right now. This tale was set up perfect from the get go! Ur just flat out amazing at this... so i really hope another plot bunny bites u ;)
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
too bad your leaving. I really enjoyed your story, very well written.
i hope your original fics go well, maybe i'll check them out.
;)
i loved the family feel at the end of the story.
i hope your original fics go well, maybe i'll check them out.
;)
i loved the family feel at the end of the story.
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October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well... that was amazing. TTwTT I've been in love with this story since I've started reading, and how amazing it has been. You've written one hell of a fanfiction here, thank you.
I'll be sure to check out your DA, I'd love to find out more about the Society. Good luck~
I'll be sure to check out your DA, I'd love to find out more about the Society. Good luck~
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...best...chapter...EVER!!!!
oh my god! John got eaten! and it was such a well written description of the event to!lol, rex has such a cute personality. I think this was a very clever way to summarize HB's and John's meeting again. I never would have thought of it. Really love how this chapter went, im thoroughly impressed.
where did you find out about the wyrm? i tried to find a picture of it...
I love happy reunions...kinda gross that they kissed while John was covered in stomach acid...lol, they're so cute with each other.
:D
oh my god! John got eaten! and it was such a well written description of the event to!lol, rex has such a cute personality. I think this was a very clever way to summarize HB's and John's meeting again. I never would have thought of it. Really love how this chapter went, im thoroughly impressed.
where did you find out about the wyrm? i tried to find a picture of it...
I love happy reunions...kinda gross that they kissed while John was covered in stomach acid...lol, they're so cute with each other.
:D
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woot more more. Brillantly written and absorbing. I can't wait for the rest especially now that I'm dying to know what plan lazurus has come up with.
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
will there be smexy-ness in the last chapter? :B
hope manning gets whats coming to him
hope manning gets whats coming to him
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hellboy and John are so cute. they miss each other so much.
“As tempting as it is, I will not have phone sex with you.”
ahaha, best line ever! i wonder what will happen? how will john get home sooner?
“As tempting as it is, I will not have phone sex with you.”
ahaha, best line ever! i wonder what will happen? how will john get home sooner?
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, this has to be my favourite chapter. I laughed—really and genuinely laughed—at the Ellis/Nacho/Phone-call interlude. Not only was the humour refreshing, it wasn’t forced which made it all the better.
Also, I applaud you for addressing a criticism in the story and making it a part of the plot. I don’t know if you had that planned from the beginning, the illegality of the transfer, or you changed it because of that comment, but either way, it was well played.
Also, I applaud you for addressing a criticism in the story and making it a part of the plot. I don’t know if you had that planned from the beginning, the illegality of the transfer, or you changed it because of that comment, but either way, it was well played.
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The addition of the new characters has drawn me back to this story. The little girl especially. There is something so stupefying sweet about her and yet she is the brains of the operation. And still subject to a sibling rivalry of sorts, lol.