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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed the conversation between Abe and Hellboy at the beginning. You worked his psychic gift in there seamlessly and humorously. I must admit when I read that chapter title, I was expecting Liz to come back and whip up everything into a tension filled triangle. I was pleasantly surprised though. I’m glad you made her into a friend instead of an arch enemy, but I wonder if that could be a possibility later…hmm.
As always, I loved it and cannot wait to see the next instalment.
As always, I loved it and cannot wait to see the next instalment.
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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is really good! im not a big fan of the HB movie, but you've made the characters a lot more interesting in this situation then they were on screen. looking forward to future chapters!!!
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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love you! I've been following Eternity and the Sparrow, loving every bit of it, and now you grace us with this! I'm thrilled since there isn't enough Hellboy/John stuff as it is and I gobble up every bit that I can find!
Smile,
Lady D
Smile,
Lady D
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A gay werewolf? Remus Lupin! Ha, Ha.. No, I'm kidding. I'm loving this story, thank you for updating so quickly.
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome story! i can't wait for the next chapter!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“I know he wakes up at ten; I’m the one who gets him out of bed with a cart of food. “I wake up at six everyday Red.”
He looks abhorred at the idea, “Why?”
That had me laughing out loud. I know a few people who do that and I feel the same way HB does about it. I’m happy to see an update so soon and to learn more about John’s inner workings. The tension building looks so promising. You’re style of writing for first person is just the best, please continue!
He looks abhorred at the idea, “Why?”
That had me laughing out loud. I know a few people who do that and I feel the same way HB does about it. I’m happy to see an update so soon and to learn more about John’s inner workings. The tension building looks so promising. You’re style of writing for first person is just the best, please continue!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Truly wonderful story u have going here! I love ones with this feel, and this couple lol. There r not enough of them out there. I hope u stick with the story and update soon!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes. more. please. soon.
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
‘I don’t realize that Abe’s been observing me until he speaks. “How long has this,” he makes a gesture with one hand from John, then to me, “been going on? It seems like something I would not have missed.”’
‘I grumble, guilt stirring a little. Blue can do that to me, but it doesn’t mean I’m going to apologize. Boy Scout get’s resettled, his grimace smoothing into a furrowed brow. My hand strays back to John. It’s like I’m drawn to his hair. I run my fingers through it. John’s hair is soft, even if it is slicked with sweat. It reminds me of my cats… well, minus the sweat.’
‘I punch the speaker again, “Hey, pick up the pace, would ya’?” I get a warbled affirmative. The device isn’t doing so hot after my first attack on it and I have to fool with the button a minute before I can get it to shut off.’
Are just some of my favourite passages from this first chapter. Needless to say, I’m enamoured. Honestly, I don’t even glance at Slash too often, but I’m so glad I did. This is wonderfully written. What struck me most is how witty it all is. You’ve captured the ‘don’t-give-a-damn’ essence of Hellboy perfectly and created a very plausible situation and dialogue (sans the Werewolves ‘n all…) I am so glad you posted this and hope you can continue!
‘I grumble, guilt stirring a little. Blue can do that to me, but it doesn’t mean I’m going to apologize. Boy Scout get’s resettled, his grimace smoothing into a furrowed brow. My hand strays back to John. It’s like I’m drawn to his hair. I run my fingers through it. John’s hair is soft, even if it is slicked with sweat. It reminds me of my cats… well, minus the sweat.’
‘I punch the speaker again, “Hey, pick up the pace, would ya’?” I get a warbled affirmative. The device isn’t doing so hot after my first attack on it and I have to fool with the button a minute before I can get it to shut off.’
Are just some of my favourite passages from this first chapter. Needless to say, I’m enamoured. Honestly, I don’t even glance at Slash too often, but I’m so glad I did. This is wonderfully written. What struck me most is how witty it all is. You’ve captured the ‘don’t-give-a-damn’ essence of Hellboy perfectly and created a very plausible situation and dialogue (sans the Werewolves ‘n all…) I am so glad you posted this and hope you can continue!