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June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Dear. GOD!!! That was simply...ORGASMIC! Holy Hell fire! I came looking for a good story about the boys, and you not only delivered, you blew my mind!
NEVER STOP WRITING
Aden Diction
-!-Addiction-!-
NEVER STOP WRITING
Aden Diction
-!-Addiction-!-
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April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, it was pretty good, but you need paragraphs. It's not only just one paragraph, it's riddled with run-ons and errors. There is even one part where you put 'read' instead of 'Reid'.
If your author's note at the bottom was spaced out, then your story should have been spaced out. It doesn't seem like the website's fault in this instance.
If your author's note at the bottom was spaced out, then your story should have been spaced out. It doesn't seem like the website's fault in this instance.
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY HOLY HELL!!! That was damned sexy.
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story!
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is like one big run on sentance. You should use paragraphs, to make reading a bit easier on the eyes. Other than that, your story is hot.