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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i like this one shot i wish you had turned it into a story because i just wanted to see how brian's life would be with verone.. but its still good anyway lolo
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December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is really good,but it seems to be more of a start to a longer story then what it is. I hope you think about continuing this story sometime!
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July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't think you should end this story here it's a great start you should continue and see where the story takes you!
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
~drools~ Umm... would it be to much to ask for another chapter...
I'd really like to see what Verone would do when he came back in later...
That and the whole Brian being submissive even though he didn't want to be was very sexy...
So please please please just one more chapter!
I'd really like to see what Verone would do when he came back in later...
That and the whole Brian being submissive even though he didn't want to be was very sexy...
So please please please just one more chapter!
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, please don't leave it like that and update story. I loved it but want more.
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! Please you can't stop it there. Another chappie please.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really like this story and hope you decide to continue it. Please add more.
Misty.
Misty.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was great. Please add more. I loved it.
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July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I was waiting for one of these! No one's done any! I have started one myself and I'm glad to see someone else was thinking along the same lines! Thank you
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July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You can't end it there. Please cont. Please another chapter!!!