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April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story had me engrossed all day today. Your writing style really pulls the reader in and allows them to empathize with the characters. Please keep writing this!!!
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that is awesome! please let me know when you update! lonewolfjags@gmail.com
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
POST!!!!!
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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im not sure what I should say, everything I try just doesn't do you justice. I think im in love. Iv not felt this way about a story with all the different perspectives ever. The way you write just draws you me in. Im also going to take this story as being what happends after the movies. Since the very first CH. iv thought this was going to turn out so many ways, and then having Vaako side of things.... *swoon* BLOODY FREAKING BRILLIANT!!!!! at this point its going to be great no matter how you finsh it!
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still enjoying the story. Just finished 19. It's reminding me of what Johns told Fry- "Murders aside, Riddick belongs in the asshole hall of fame. He loves to jaw-jack and he loves to make you feel afraid because that's all he has, and you're playing right into it." Glad Riddick retains this edge when matched for brawn. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Would've reviewed sooner, but didn't catch up til 3:00 in the morning. Had work at 6. Your story is awesome. Didn't much care for Chronicles of Riddick (thought Dark Fury was only mildly better), but Ghost redeems all qualities. When I think of the sequels, this is how I want to remember the legacy of Pitch Black. Excellent work. Can't wait for what's next.
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
15: whoa that was wired... thanks for sharing!
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah! this parts was certainly worth telling from both sides *loved it*
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October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter 13: beautiful scene.... let's hope they manage to get over the issues the've built up all those years
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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 11) It's Vaako speaking, but the insight it gives for Kain is what makes it really special for me. He gains a lot of character here, one I'd like to hear more of! Thanks again for the update... waited for that ;)