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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... Riddick really has a way to collect everybodies symphaties in chapter 10 *lol*!!!
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story! ill give it an 8 out of 10. it goes with the story really well. my favorite part is when Riddick is asking Jack how she got eyes like hers....clever and sooo awesome! what would have made it really better is if you had Jack forgive Riddick and the two of them "makin up" if ya know what i mean . Keep writing! i love your work!
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written! Thanks again for updating!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of course it was worth the wait! You kept me glued to the screen for quite a while ;)
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Daaaamnnn, you made me wait the whole chapter for him, you know? And I really enjoyed that, thanks again!
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yummy, thanks for the soon update. Again, you managed to make a chapter a perfect curve of suspense, giving insight in yet another character - I could keep on reading that forever!
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All the detail, told in different perspectives... awesome piece of work!
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! this story is so beautiful and writing of a quality that any1 should aspire to. I really hope there's more. keep up the good work!