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for The First

by jillshields

person ametomoe
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like it, its cute. the song lyrics are placed well too. but whats with the little (break) thingies? does that mean an instrumental from the song?
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaawwwwwwww that was so cute! i want round 2!
person Drew
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this story :)