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for Never Meant To Be

by Jacksfavoritewench

schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love happy sparrabeth endings!Thanks for writing this cute fic...You are so talented!You write both darker fics and some fluffy ones too-all are great!Thanks to you there's always something sparrabethical to read here on adult ff!!!:)
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All right! This is going great! Realy. "...Now Jack would spend every waking moment proving his love for the woman he had so desperately tried to protect his heart from."
I love it! Keep going :)
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job! I really liked this chapter. Keep up the good work!
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I realy liked that fic untill the end of chapter 4(not that I won't kepp reading). Pleace, she sounds like a mad man just escaped from the mad house! He LOVES HER!!! There is no need for her to use him like that. Give him a chance to explane to her that his's only trying to protect her(-from beaking her heart, no matter he did just that)!
PS:The idia of "...Now all she had to do was make sure that Jack took her every opportunity that was available..." I LOVED that, but still...
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o0o! i could feel the tension. i love your writing and can't wait for the next chapter
person susie869
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just love your writing... turns me on so ;) and you write beautifully. Keep up the good work hun and keep them coming... feeds my addiction :)

Susie