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I know it has been almost four years since you've updated this, but I would truly appreciate a continuation of this story. I've started reading your other fics after finding "What the Cat Dragged in" and I truly appreciate your style and writing voice. In this story, I love that their relationship is a slice of normalcy amidst all the monster fighting. You focus on the human emotion--and not just Bethany's, or even just her's and Hellboys, but the people around them that are put in these circumstances as well. If you've ever had a thought of continuing this fic, pleaseplease do so.

And don't leave me hanging on "What the Cat Dragged in" either.

Please update soon!! I'm loving this! :)

This is so amazing!!!!! I ususally don't read fics like this in fear that they'll be unrealistic and cliche and yet. This isn't at all. I'm surprised I haven't stumble upon this on another fanfic site. It's believable how their relationship is like and how things aren't rushed. Like when things get 'hot' or stuff. Please update soon!

I love this story! I hope that there will be more in the future. You are a tremendous author. Update soon if the story insn't dead.

Wow. Poor Bethany was poisoned by those ickle cavewights. I'm impressed at the research you did on the medical perspective on this chapter. Nothing ruins the suspension of belief more than spotty research, or none at all. So, good job. ^.^ I can't believe that Manning would want Bethany to leave, and did I get the insinuation that Glen had something to do with it too? Jerks. Hellboy was so sweet to be worried and wanting to watch over her like that. And that bit of smut at the end of the chapter was unexpected, but certainly a welcome surprise. I always get rediculously excited when I see an update, and I am immediately sucked into the story when I begin reading, and can't help but feel sad there isn't more. But I don't mind the wait. It's worth it. ^.^ As usual, it was a spectacular chapter, and I can't wait to read the next installment. And reguarding reviews, all readers that don't leave a review after reading a chapter should be flogged. It's a small price to pay for being entertained by a talented authoress. ^.^

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Ero

Oh NO!! What happened to Bethany? Did she get scratched by one of those darts? Did they have some sort of poison on them? Did she get scratched by one of those nasty buggers? Ack, I'm so worried. There's no way she's just sick. And why did the cave wights not want to attack her? This story is getting intense!! I just want to say again that you are doing such a fabulous job, and thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. This is different from anything I've read, and I get all kinds of excited when I see an update!! I wish I knew other people that were into this fandom so they could read it. I really liked the descriptions of the caves, very beautiful. And the old man was sweet. ^.^ Red's comments on the cave, and Bethany's realization that he was watching her decorating show was too funny. ^.^ As always, I can't wait to read more!!

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Ero

If I may take moment to gush again about this story and how well written it is. Everyone's character's are spot on, and I love that among all the love between HB and Bethany you take the time to add in missions to go on. I love reading the missions, they are incredibly detailed,and well researched, and dammit, it's a shame more people or ready this story because it's bloody fabulous. I'm sorry it took so long to read and review. My power cord for my laptop stopped working, and it was a whole month before I got a new one. Anywho....Bethany healing like that was amazing. I'm wondering, like Abe if HB doesn't have like super sperm or something. LOL. Oh lord, *rolls eyes* if that were the case, every single man would offer everytime we got hurt or sick. As it is, if I get a headache or something my hubby says, "You know what's good for that...." LOL. Silly men. In all seriousness though, I am torn betweent the idea of supersperm, and another having to do with Red himself. Something about having found a mate, and marking her as his gave her a connection with him, and obviously his healng abilities. That would be kind of cool. Healed by lurve. LOL. I still adore Abe and the Professor as always, and I am so glad that Bethany has found a friend in Christine. It seems like Bethany had quite a lonely life growing up, not much chance to make and keep friends, and we all know how importnt that is for a woman. ^.^ I am SO excited to read about the cave wights, I have to say again I am impressed at all the creature research you do. I am curious about the dreams both of them had, most likely some sort of foreshadowing going on. And the way the chaper finished with Red giving her the reliquary (sp) was sweet. ^.^ So it's off to West Virginia we go!!!
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Tara

Hej there, I just spent a good part of my night reading your story and I just couldn't stop. I really, really love your style, the way you portray the characters, those you invented and of course, Bethany. You had a few typing errors but that's just something I noticed on the way. I would love to read more! Please write on soon, I am dying to know what happens next!

Yay! I got to spend all day shopping at the Pennsylvania Horse World Expo, and then find your update waiting for me when I got home! What a marvelous day, and an even more marvelous chapter!:-)(Oh, and I have a feeling that Ero Sennin is having computer issues, she's suddenly disappeared, but I wouldn't count her out.)

Anyway, I'm curious as hell to find out what this mysteriously healed bite wound means! I have a few ideas that range from the werewolves to...well, I'm not saying it...I can wait! Okay, I can't really, but still, I'm not saying it...don't want to ruin it! I'm so intrigued by this...her healing, as far as the shoulder goes, is accelerated, but yet her body is not "feeling up to" round two with Red...hmmm...Oh, and I loved the part about Red spreading his powerful immune system through bodily fluids...all bodily fluids!lol That's sort of the reverse of getting an STD!lol If that were so though, it would have made for an interesting rest of the story...Red's already feeling horny over Bethany, and if he can leech accelerated healing into her, then any time she coughed or sneezed, he'd be all "I have something for that!"lol The bite wound/healing thing is a great plot detail, it's got me wondering!

And I like how Bethany and Christine have gotten closer throughout the story, and I like that Glenn is still a jerk too! You've done a really great job establishing relationships between your characters that makes them seem so very viable!

And so now it's off to West Virginia to knock out a Cavewight problem? Fantastic! I love how you handle the monster side of this too! Truly, your chapters never let me down in anyway!:-)

Thank you for updating, and I'll see if I can't round up a few more readers for you too! But one thing is for certain; if you're not reading this story, then it's your loss! I don't know how anyone could be a fan of Hellboy and not get into this yarn you're so expertly spinning! Great job, and just what I needed to get back to working on my chapter...been a busy week, so I needed your update so very very much!:-) Thanks again!

Grace

Hey Psyche, this is a review that was posted on the LiveJournal Community "Hellishness" about your story, so I re-posted it here. Not the longest review, but here it is:

"Good! I love every part of this. I wait for next chapter.

Sorry for my English." -- No Name Given

Hope there's more to come!

Grace