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by Atroxian

person Anon
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Has tears in his eyes, pokes fan fic with stick...Is it dead????
person Elexen
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This such a lovely story, ahah I know it sound horrible considering it's 'gory' details.
Lovely and satisfying is what i really thing. The shocking gruesome secret is a lovely twist and
the slow boil relationship between vaalko and riddick is really satisfy because I've read to much
trash in this category. I throughly enjoyed it even if it's not finished.
person GellyBelly
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHH! Riddick is starting to have feelings for .. dammit i forgot to spell his name... Vaako? or is it vakoo? watever.
But anyway! AAHHH! Hope you update soon!!
person jezack
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Vaako, you're such a sneaky little mouseXD Those rumors have to weight on your mind quite a lot, haven't they? XD

Poor Second Commander, he's going to be food, isn't he?
Jack is precious as alwaysXD
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol at jack!
loving this, btw!
person jezared
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is getting better and better! Poor man Vaako, I hope he'll get some time out real soon because at this rate, he'll surely get that heart attack!

Jack is such a mean little noodleXD And Riddic shouldn't enjoy the situation this much, really XD
person GellyBelly
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Daaaayuuum!! Just got done reading chapter 5 hmmmmm
I'm just wondering if Riddick is going to do something
sexy because his hungry and... Shoot I don't make sense.
Oh well. GLAD YOU UPDATED! I thought this story was
going to be ditched! Glad you didn't!!
person GellyBelly
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice man. This story is tight!!! Good thing you updated.
I'm not really a big fan of cannibalism but this story
is an exception hahaha. PLEASE UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN!!!!!
THANK YOU!!!
person jezared
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is feakin' great! XD I just love how Riddic can eat human flesh and be cool about it, and how you made Jack here - scared shitless, but still trying to get used to her "hero's" eating habbitsXD And what do you know, Riddic can crack a joke once in a while!
Jak's plea at the end of the third chapter was a good motive too, of course she would like that, being a part of her idol - just not the face, buecause it would be gross... very teenaged of her^_^

It's really good three chapters, I hope there will be more *waiting to see how would Vaako react to the news about his new Lord Marshall diet*
person HannaFO
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well this is most certanly one of the most original fics I have ever read..
Not that that is a bad thing :D Please do continue your unique and interesting work.