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November 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Keen, if you're still checking in here after all these years just know that musey and I still miss you and you can still contact me anytime. Be safe
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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love your story please add me to the update list thingy. :)
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December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're back :D
This chapter's interaction among Gi's children and between them and Fushel is lovely, taking credits for saving him a seat and stuff.
I like the many faces you give Fushel, he is a loyal friend to Ali, that's the first impression I have for him. And now it seems that although he's lascivious, he's also capable of rising above and be a good protector for Gi, his consideration and the kids accepting him(but JalarXD) and him asking Isis for help and all. Mostly though, I like him for his smugness. But what's with the remark of forgiving? Did he do something wrong to Gi previously? I can't recall :S
Again, thanks for sharing!
(a little early but Merry Christmas :D)
This chapter's interaction among Gi's children and between them and Fushel is lovely, taking credits for saving him a seat and stuff.
I like the many faces you give Fushel, he is a loyal friend to Ali, that's the first impression I have for him. And now it seems that although he's lascivious, he's also capable of rising above and be a good protector for Gi, his consideration and the kids accepting him(but JalarXD) and him asking Isis for help and all. Mostly though, I like him for his smugness. But what's with the remark of forgiving? Did he do something wrong to Gi previously? I can't recall :S
Again, thanks for sharing!
(a little early but Merry Christmas :D)
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December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great update, Keenstuff. It's so fun seeing Fushel squirm in regards to the kids. I had to go back and read Chappie 11. It was too much of a gem not to. XD
It will be interesting to see if he can keep his dick in his loin cloth when it comes certain 'elements'.
I like the sound of this young unblood. I hope he comes back into the scene at some point. After all, he had the compassion to see if Gi was alright.
Looking forward to your next update, Keenstuff.
It will be interesting to see if he can keep his dick in his loin cloth when it comes certain 'elements'.
I like the sound of this young unblood. I hope he comes back into the scene at some point. After all, he had the compassion to see if Gi was alright.
Looking forward to your next update, Keenstuff.
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December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keeeeeen! OMG you're back!!!
I'm so happy you're still able to continue this story. It is such a long-running tale that you've really become attatched to all the characters after all this time. The tragedy of Gi really is such a sad story, especially considering how she was pretty much the most cheerful and happy character. And of all the people she wound up with, it had to be Fushel, heh. But I guess he's trying, in his own way, even though he really is such a horny bastard.
So yeah, it was just such a wonderful treat to see this updated. I hope you will still be able to continue it down the line, even if it takes some time to get a chapter done. It just is such a great story.
Take care and Bravo!
-DGD
I'm so happy you're still able to continue this story. It is such a long-running tale that you've really become attatched to all the characters after all this time. The tragedy of Gi really is such a sad story, especially considering how she was pretty much the most cheerful and happy character. And of all the people she wound up with, it had to be Fushel, heh. But I guess he's trying, in his own way, even though he really is such a horny bastard.
So yeah, it was just such a wonderful treat to see this updated. I hope you will still be able to continue it down the line, even if it takes some time to get a chapter done. It just is such a great story.
Take care and Bravo!
-DGD
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December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lovely Keen. This is my favorite story. I feel like you are the last of the great authors that actually still updates their predator fics! Thank goodness!
I love Fushel, he is all masculine and trying to figure out how to take care of a ready made family. I love how you write him. Also I feel so bad for Gi, she is trying to survive losing the love of her life and taking care of her children. It's a hard thing to do, but hopefully Fushel will help heal her broken heart... *wink* *wink* lol.
I love Fushel, he is all masculine and trying to figure out how to take care of a ready made family. I love how you write him. Also I feel so bad for Gi, she is trying to survive losing the love of her life and taking care of her children. It's a hard thing to do, but hopefully Fushel will help heal her broken heart... *wink* *wink* lol.
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December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing!!!!! AS ALWAYS <3<3<3
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December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story and I really can't wait to read more. The characters are amazing and they all stand alone in their own way. I have fallen in love with your characters as well as the way that you write. I'm happy that I came across this story as well as your profile. If I hadn't checked out your profile, I wouldn't have found the predaphile network. So, thank you very much for that. All in all, amazing story, great new chapter, and I can't wait for the next one to come out. Don't really care how long it takes you, I will be waiting patiently for it.
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December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know it is rude to rush a writer but I miss this story so much, please come back : )
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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why is the story on hiatus? =< I love your writing... my email is cursed_darkness@hotmail.com