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OMG you just want to smack th smug out of Fushel. My heart breaks for Gi.Why of all people did Heron have to die. He was such a hero. always there, always comforting. please update soon.

Wow Keeno, you just continue to whip out awesomeness after awesomeness (is there such a thing as too much awesome? Certainly not here! :) )

I was chuckling a lot at Fushel's dilema trying to deal with all the children, he really is in a tight spot. Will he really make himself into an unredeemable ass? Oh, and of course, Ali'shir and Isis interactions FTW (punching the dick is foreplay huh? :D)

You still are pulling at my heartstrings with Gi. Sounds like she was able to have such a nice big family unlike most others, and now all those little kids will grow up without their father. Poor Heron :(

Anyway, superb as always!

Wow! Impressive. I love this and am scared for Gi. I can't imagine what will happen next. I hope we will find out soon.

You are cookin' girl. You should slow down a bit, but not as slow as me. hehe

I don't trust Fushel as far as I could kick him. I hope he slips up and Isis can kick butt. It'll be interesting to know if Gi actually saw in her visions who killed them. Shall have to wait and see.

Good chappies Keenstuff. Don't forget, I, I mean we need some pussy teasing in the mix too. XD

Wow Keeno! Welcome back! And two chapters coming right after another. You rock!

As always, extremely well written and the characters are just so wonderful to read about. Poor Heron and Gi though, that really was sad. I wonder how she'll deal with all of this.

Lots of interesting politics you're weaving into this one too with all the elder stuff. It is very entertaining. I'll definitely continue to look forward to this one continuing. :)

-DGD

Thank you for the B'Day wishes and the tease. I'd like to see Isis tie him up and tease the crap out of him only day HEHE.

I hope Ali'shir finds out who killed Heron, Bahdri and all. Could be closer to home than what he would like? Like former mate and son maybe! I know we will find out.

Yay. it's back...but it's not updated... oh well. i'm just glad to see it's back! see ya next update.

I like about cried when this disappeared from the site the other day. I grieved the loss of these two dynamic characters you created. Pitiful...yeah I know. This is a great story.

Great to see them finally work things out, I mean, they always care about their faces and everything, and it's kind of tense when Ali lost control.
I like the last paragraph especially, that's such a commitment, and they're home with each other again.
Looking forward to reading what happens next =)
(more nerdism?)

Ooh Goody. I like drama with these two, but I love the tenderness they share, too. I love these characters and of course the story itself.
You have a way of making readers care enough about them to keep coming back to read more and more. Of course when there is great writing the reader doesn't want the story to end. Just tell me there will be other stories to look forward to as well.