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I signed up just so I could tell you how much I love this series... story plus sequel thing. I really like how you develop the characters nicely so it don't seem like their archs jump in a totally unbelievable manner. I noticed that sometimes terms are used repeatedly to describe things like "he grit" and I don't know if you mean that as a defining characteristic of the character, but I thought I would point that out to you.

Well, I hope you update soon I check obsessively everyday because I NEED to know what happens next.

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OMG!! I did not know you updated.. I'be been looking for it.. Damn its like chirstmas all over again... Have me 3 chapters to catch up on!!!!

Finally, that rotten pussy tease finally tells her how he feels (with a bit of a pussy tease in for good measure) XD.

Great work Keenstuff

That chapter was scorchin smokin hot! Please don't give up on this story...I'd cry. I check for updates often. This story is too great to shelf. Please see it through to whatever end you choose. It is one of the best fics I've read ever!

I LOVE this fic, I check for updates all the time! I'm so glad to see Ali’shir and Isis are starting to get their feelings out in the open...they're a great couple. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Also, a question...does Ali’shir still wear his mask? I know he wouldn't wear it in front of Isis, but in public...? I haven't read any mention of if so I'm just asking.

Man! Great chapter! Both ali'shir and isis are SOOO DAME STUBBORN and hard headed! They don't even realise how much they love each other and how perfect they are for each other. It took soooo much for ali'shir to admit his feelings and let his gaurd down for her and she is still leaving! Stupid isis! Why can't she just stop running away and realize how good she has it. Once you go predator, there is no other! Lol. Im soo hooked on this story, I hope it ends well! Update soon and don't forget about The Akeh! Your a very talented writer.

Great chapter! Glad to see them back together even with all the angst between them. Can't wait for the next chapter.a

I'm especially curious about the background of the story! What's the human central government? A monarchy? I also like those Archers, very creative! Reminds me of Deus Ex. By the way, whatever happened to Kai and her son?
Looking forward to more.

So is isis planning on four, three, or one mate? Will her human fiance survive meeting Ali? How will Isis take so many females on the ship having more intimate knowlege of Ali? I have so many questions. Please whatever happens let it be scandalous battle of gender wit, my favorite. I like to laugh is all. I love what you have done with Isis the temptress, and I'd love to see more of that side of her.

Thanks for sharing, that's brilliant! I really wasn't expecting you to update so often, I was just trying my luck to check if there's any update during the holiday and here they are!
It's great to see Isis back with the yautja which means a lot of fun(and a lot of arguing for the pair), I doubt if it's possible for her to go back as she claimed she would. Surely Ali will try to stop her and I'm really looking forward to their confrontation or whatever it might be when they meet with the Ro'al. Great to see Gi and Heron's children have grown, it's like, feeling more realistic to have kids growing up(something to show time has passed maybe? I don't know why'd I feel that way I just do) and this would add some new anticipation to the story. But frankly, I don't remember who was Ny'iam XD The plot involves so many characters it's hard to remember them all, yet this is exactly why I like your story so much cause I can't point out who's important and who's not or what their next move would be(or say I am too thick to think thoroughly)
well that's about all I'd like to say, thanks again for your hard work, and happy new year!