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I had to catch up on my reading. I LOVED the last two chapters. I can't wait to see another update. It totally makes my day! Keep up the outstanding work!

Oh I've been bad, I haven't reviewed in several chapters yet good ol Keeno keeps on bringing in new ones with such swiftness. I'm sorry! :(

But once again, I'm in awe with the way you are able to create the tension and grit that exists in this relationship with Isis and Ali'shir. Their conversations are just such a joy to read which contain both wit and genuine emotion. Things haven't changed though for sure, both still are concerned for eachother but will never show it, and Heron is still being forced to act as a go-between for them. I wouldn't be suprised if he or someone else eventually smacked them both around for being so stubborn.

So, I've gathered that Isis was on that planet to indeed start a new life. I guess she believes she can live normally without the Yautja now. And judging by her last words, she intends to start over again. But I'm guessing that those people who were after her will never let her be, no matter where she goes and Ali will have to save her again.

But again, it's just a treat reading your story and I'll always be looking out for continuations whenever they arrive.

As always, good show! :)

Wow! Thanks for the gift. I absolutely loved this. Ali commenting to Heron about her always looking at him that way...hilarious. I just love these characters you have created. The females having more than one mate levels the playing field and opens up interesting possibilities. I appreciate the liscence to theorize, but I just want to enjoy the ride from now on. It looks like it will be full of fun twists.

Uh-oh! U got ur stories mixed up! Lol. Its ok....but I do love the new chapters of this story. Keep with it!

Yes!Wow! This was one of the most exciting chapters I've ever read in predfiction. Thanks for brightening my day. I was grinning ear to ear by the end of this chapter. Can't wait to read more.
I'll do my best to keep my insights to myself...just for you though.

Damn, another chapter means that I have to write another review. You know...I'm thinking I'm just gonna copy and paste. LOL Just kidding! And you suck! Making me think that Ali had died...again. The suspense was wonderful and I almost teared up as I was reading it. And then...'you dirty faker!' That was just too good. Also...I would offer to beta for you, but I really don't have time with work and all. But I do so love your writing and can't wait to see more of it. Take care, girlie! :D

Whoa, like seriously I am really confused but in a good way. I like the fact that I am not sure quite what is happening yet, but that every chapter opens up a new clue. So Isis left Ali, she started a new life on earth, there is something strange happening on earth and I think maybe those body guards work for the son of Douglass and that the son wants to meet Isis since he took up his father's work. But this is all guessing on my part! haha. I love this story and I love Isis so I am so happy you are writing this sequel!!

Heya, total newbie to predaphile stuff, and the first thing I found was yours - I have to say its the best thing I've written in this section :D. Fabulous, please continue!
Xxx

I am so ecstatic! I loved this chapter. Lots of excitement and wonderful descriptions. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next one. If I haven't already said it before, I'll say it now: You are a very talented writer. PLEASE update again soon. Please?

~Amentet

Thanks. I have a feeling Ali might kidnap her, but we'll see. Can't wait to read more.