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you know...the twists and turns in this fic are just astounding. I really have no idea what to expect or who/what we might get to see next. And as always, don't worry about how long it takes to update so long as you do. We will wait for however long it takes. I love these characters and what they are doing/going through. It's like chocolate!! Keep up the great work. Have a Happy Thanksgiving!! :D

I am very happy for thanksgiving.. I haven't even read it yet and i'm doing the happy dance!!!! Thanks for the gift of a chapter.. Thank you... Thank you.... Thank you !!!

I loved ur story! I didn't like the 1st ending in the 1st story. I didn't want her 2 die. I was interested 2 know more about ali'shir's family and how a yautja female got with a human male and had 2 kids.(a prequal type story perhaps?) please update asap. Have isis and ali'shir get back 2gether now!!!!!

I see what you're doing. You're ... not putting up a new chapter .___.
I'm excited as it is, that my favorite Predator-story has a sequel, but I can't be the only one sitting and yanking my hair when there's no new chapter?
Except me being extremely impatient, I'm glad to see someone writing so well, and taking their time on writing something good :)
And as many have said before me... Keep up the good work!

It's great to see the sequel! And it feels like the plot's more complicated than the last one, with both humans and predators authority generating troubles for them, I can't wait to read the next chapter=]
Thanks for sharing!

Hah! First time they see eachother in who knows how long and all she wants to do is bash him in the head. I guess some things never change :D

I'm glad to see you finally continue on with this one Keen. I'm definitely looking forward to finding out what exactly is going on and what led up to this current situation from the time when they parted.

So entertaining, and such a treat to read. Cannot wait for more. :)

You have officially made my day!!! I was actually giddy with excitement when I saw that you updated. I can't even begin to tell you how eager I am for the next chapter. I'm loving it!!! Please update again soon! Please? Please? Please? *puppy dog eyes*

~Amentet

Hi Keen. Yes I am so glad I am able to review again. Before we could review freely, then we had to log in, and now we can review freely again. First of all I love this story, the first one and the now this sequel. However, I am so lost as to what is happening, Isis obviously left Ali and started a new life with humans. Now he is back and I am wondering if he was part of those hunters but probably not because they were going to hurt her. hmm...very interesting. I love your stories. I think maybe you re-edited the first part so I am going to read that again, just in case I am missing something for this new sequel.
I love love Isis and I am so glad she is back. I hope Ali is there to take her back because he has been laying with all this other women when he clearly is still in love Isis.
I can't wait until the next chapter. Have I mentioned how much I love this story? haha.

OMG!! So glad to see an update!! I thought the worest... But i am happy now!! Thank you so much for continue this story. Bravo! Bravo!

I have been waiting for this update! I can't wait to see what happens next!