rate_review Reviews

I'm so glad you're making a sequal! I loved the original story! Isis is my hero! She's so realistic and amazing and so is Ali'shir! Anyways, great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!

Thanks so much,
eyexheartxreita
AKA. Koori

Ooooyeah! Sequel is drawing me in big time. I love the way you write. I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next.

Hm, I believe I know who Jane really is... eh??

Great start Keenstuff.

I see Ali'shir hasn't pulled himself together as Lead Elder yet. It'll be very interesting to see what happens when Rath'ol and Hay'un meet up with Isis. I can see a serious 'yautja butt kickin' session happening. lol Much to the Yautja's suprise too. XD And I wonder if that was what was on the message. That someone had finally found Isis.

Next chapter please, when you are able

Hell! That was fast! Great beginning and a fucking beautifull description of the places. Seems that a lot happened since Isis left... Keep up the good work and update ASAP.
BTW: woohoo! First Rewiew and rate!

Nice!! Me happy!!

OOOOO! I am titillated by the prospect of this new thrill ride. I simple cannot wait to see all the twists and turns this one is going to take. Very nicely started. And from what I have seen so far, it will be a match to the first. So, don't worry, the sequel will be just fine!

Oh, I did find one little hang-up. In the very beginning. You have the mother named as Maria and then it changes to Marca. So, I'm guessing that the first one is the mistake. Other than that, it was awesomeness on a stick!!!