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Oh I'm so happy you did not stop this. A friend and I have been waiting and waiting for it. We've actually made a few inner jokes about it. I really hope to see more chapters more often. Keep up the wonderful work, it's one of the best.

There hasn't been an update in forever~! I hope you post one soon <3

I reread the story again, it gets better each time :D

I'm pretty sure I just saw it was your birthday in the forum....so HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! Please oh please post soon, I need your Joker like a junki needs crack. The candy scene plays out so vividly in my head through out my day. Hope everything was great for your special day. *HUGS*

I'm pretty sure I just saw it was your birthday in the forum....so HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! Please oh please post soon, I need your Joker like a junki needs crack. The candy scene plays out so vividly in my head through out my day. Hope everything was great for your special day. *HUGS*

The cliffhanger here is driving me crazy! This is such a good story. I really like that you gave Harley OCD, because it makes her more interesting than just being "a crazy person!" like most people see her (also, I have OCD as well as a few other things, and as someone with OCD, I can say that you are portraying someone with the disorder very well). Anyway, just thought I'd put in my 2 cents. Great going here! :-)

WOW! That chapter 8 was the cliff hanger of a lifetime. BRILLIANT story. The Jokers speach is so realistic, I found myself smacking my husband in the arm and saying " Listen to this! " more than once. I love that your working with real characters, and breathing a great deal of there authentic personality into them. I can not wait for more! Newly, but now ever faithful. heather

I'm not too sure what I think about this story. There were points of repetition and error... but my main concern is shoving two very different characters together. The problem I have with a lot of TDK Joker fics that try to include Harley Quinn is that there's little to no change in her character from the Animated Series. You're good at writing for the animated Harley, but I don't see how she fits with Nolan and Ledger's Joker. She needs a bit of change in personality, not just background, ya know? She needs a dark personality here and you made her almost childish. The Joker also needs a little bit more depth. He really comes off as Harley's tool in the first couple of chapters when it should be the other way around. Considering he never cared for her *too* much in the first place, I have difficulty believing him to be the jealous type. ESPECIALLY since this is the Ledger version.

It also seems you didn't do a whole lot of research and it shows in the way you misspelled Arkham as "Arkem" and "Arkum" (you used both multiple times). I think you messed up a few character names as well (like Lucius). For some reason, this really bothered me. There was also some misinterpretation of Arkham's setting. You treated it like a normal mental ward and seemed to forget that this is the place where Batman's most vicious criminals get sent to. I don't think there's any room for security flaws.

All in all, it's an okay story... but as a Batman story, it misses the boat. Sorry. Don't let the words get to you. I just think you should research more past Nolan's Batman series. Good luck in the future!

VERY COOL!!! So the Joker actually does have feelings for her, go get'em J!!!!

Can't wait for more!!!

This is a very good story. I enjoy their twisted relationship very much, and I am amazed at how well that you capture the tone and the dialogue. I only have one minor complaint. I hope it doesn't offend you, and I am not trying to be mean, but there are some minor spelling and grammar errors, which are distracting while reading. I know that some people feel that Beta's will make fun of them behind their backs, or will butcher their stories, but if you like, I can look over your stories, for spelling, if you want. Please don't be upset. I am just offering, because this is a fantastic story, otherwise!! If you are interested, let me know!! dncs_angel@yahoo.com
I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Thank you for sharing your story with us!! XXOO

Na, it's cool. I really don't mind constructive criticism :)

I know my spelling and grammer are absolutely horrid. The trouble comes from typing 90+ words a minute and typing as the thoughts come rather then taking the time to go back and fix spelling and gramatical errors :(

I know I desperately need a beta to go through all of my stories and make corrections. If anyone feels like they are up to the tedious task, please let me know ;)

Oceans of Love, ~Marian The Blackadder~