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for Shattered

by DDDarkwriter

schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it
person GellyBelly
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that was some tight ass story man.
person maderine
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should be careful of your grammar and spelling. This story is a little hard to read. In particular, you switch between first- and third-person in some places, and it's confusing.