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December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For such a good story it strikes me as odd that there aren't very many reviews.
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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot, and in character. Very good work!
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I very much liked the switching between characters' point of view. There was feverish longing and intimacy. You accomplished what you set out to do quite well.
I only wish it had been drawn out a bit longer.
I only wish it had been drawn out a bit longer.
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November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was awesomely executed. Great idea, great writing, great job! :D
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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Superb, I really enjoyed it! My only criticism would be that I'd like more - so not real criticism at all!