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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE CHAPTERS!!! PPLLLEEEAAAASSSEEE!!!
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit.
I love these kinds of stories never find them, but holy SHIT.
...your ass better update.
I love these kinds of stories never find them, but holy SHIT.
...your ass better update.
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for this brilliant read. I just came out of cinema yesterday - as probably everyone else with fangirl-genes :) - completely intoxicated and searched for a good joker story. I've started reading a few but only yours really captured me. It's very well written, exciting and as IC as a story about a character we don't know anything about can be. I am very happy you took the POV of an outside person, because the fascinating thing about the Joker as a character is that he's not really reachable. Also your original character develops in a very credible way, you can almost feel yourself going insane with her. And the way you describe the the impressions she gets of the joker is just the same I had in the cinema. The scene in the rain was breathtaking, I was completely caught up in the atmosphere you build. And about the sex scene, well, I couldn't really think of the Joker as being a man after I watched the movie, but the way you described this it is probably the only scenario in which he would be a sexual human being.
If I could critisize anything (and this part is so minor it doesn't even deserve the word)is the slight change of perspective in the sex scene. Suddenly you give some impressions to describe how the Joker thinks. It's a little awkward because you stick so exclusively to Sally's point of view the whole time.
But then, please go on. It was such a great read for me, meeting every demand I could have towards perfect fanfiction.
If I could critisize anything (and this part is so minor it doesn't even deserve the word)is the slight change of perspective in the sex scene. Suddenly you give some impressions to describe how the Joker thinks. It's a little awkward because you stick so exclusively to Sally's point of view the whole time.
But then, please go on. It was such a great read for me, meeting every demand I could have towards perfect fanfiction.
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHEW!!! Their love/hate relationship makes me dizzy and tired, but it's so DELISH!!! Keep going I'm digging it!!!
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
‘Well,’ he said dryly, dropping the shirt down next to her as he stood up ‘I hope you know how to sew.’
Oh my God - this killed me! LOL! This is a great story, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Ani
Oh my God - this killed me! LOL! This is a great story, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Ani
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was unbelievably hot!! Write faster please!
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, it's SHOWER TIME!!! I can't believe you ended it there!!! You better finish what ya started. LOL!!! Can't wait for more, SOON!!!
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going! I've always been a Batman girl myself, but I have to admit that Heath's Joker is very sexy.
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is AMAZING! I think your interpretation of the Joker is dead-on! And also Sally's reactions towards him. Honestly I think the torrent of emotions she's feeling is very realistic as far as the Joker is concerned. I think some people would be afraid but angry at the same time if they were faced with someone like him, instead of just pissing their pants. LOL! Keep up the good work! *eagerly awaits next chapter* =)
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap!!! Great two chapters!!! I am digging this story. I can see a slow developing sick twisted love/hate relationship possibly starting between these two. Keep up the great work.
Take Care,
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Take Care,
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