rate_review Reviews

that is one tactic that works every time! i found that there were alot of run-on-sentences. like you couldnt get the point of a sentence and even sometimes had to reread some to get just exactly what was being said. other than that, brilliant work!

hehe I liked that it was hot =D

Was gonna skip on reviewing out of sheer lazy, but this story does deserve more than one review. Very hot, and Tony's POV amuses throughout- very in-character on his part. x3 Well done!

I've tried for a while now to come up with something good enough to say about this story, and the first thing I have to say is that I cannot BELIEVE there are no reviews so far! Seriously, what the hell? This story is incredible, I didn't know that there were many other people who thought about this couple and loved it like I did. This story is perfect. It's so well written, it's so in character and believable. It's so entertaining! I loved every line. I absolutely adore this story and you really, really did this concept justice. I'm in awe, I can't say enough about it. I'm going to recommend it to everyone everywhere.