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for Very Busy Man

by VZG

person knj4k4
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH that is classic! Ha Ha! Thanks for writing it, I'd love it if you made it into a two shot, I mean, Speed should really thank him for the blow job. also why would Tony be giving if he was being thanked anyway??
person Siarra
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you won't take it the wrong way, when I say that this fic really made me laugh. Because I really don't mean it in a bad way, but as praise. I just love the way Tony's above-all serious characterisation builds up into a little self-indulgence, only to reach crescendo in what is a huge and hilarious mistake. The things a one-track mind can get one tangled in... Your flawless, flowing writing style is a pleasure to read, giving the story a good pace and smooth progression, and the characterisations are fun and enjoyable, especially Tony's inner voice and motivations.